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There are many tales about supernatrual things happening on the Quantocks. Theres Dead Woman's Ditch where a newly wed man killed his bride he could'nt stand her nagging its said The most frequent sighted is the Headless Horseman all I can say is you would not get me back at night 

I have another intriguing tale from the seventies My dogs and I were parked up in Colston park a favourite place of mine to stop and do some DX-ing I put up an ariel hoping to catch some long distant calls We went often its quite close by and lots of good distant were on the air that night, then suddenly both my dogs sat up, they were growling deep in their throats and seem fixated on one spot I ducked down my head as the most foul smell invaded the car gaseous and an unholy smell off rotting flesh nothing was going to get me outside, not until daylight. Eventually The stench departed but still I kept my head down my dogs gradually settled down I kept my head by chatting to the other DX-ers and so infinitely slowly day finally appeared I let my dogs out, they both went to the same place sniffed around. I took down my ariel got the dogs in the car and headed for home I think I escaped from the Headless Horse man who is said to ride the Quantocks from Colston to Quantock Head and back I never went there again At night I put a lot of faith in my dogs. They sure were upset that night

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Date: 12/28/2023 3:56:00 PM
a bit eerie and certainly suspenseful and quite vivid. The smell of rotting flesh would definitely have sent me packing. I enjoyed the story, though. Wishing you a splendid evening, Sara
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Date: 12/28/2023 6:33:00 AM
Your poem paints a vivid and intriguing picture of a night in Colston Park during the seventies, filled with the anticipation of catching long-distance calls through DX-ing. The narrative takes a sudden turn when the atmosphere is disrupted by an eerie and unsettling event... The description of your dogs' reaction adds a layer of suspense, as they suddenly sit up, growl, and become fixated on an unseen presence... Your described it very well.. seems spooky and i wouldnt go there at night either
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Date: 12/28/2023 7:59:00 AM
One of the few times that I have been so petrified SO I now have no need to leave my house as I am a radio ham now adays. ty for you visit hugs Shadow

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