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Gogyoka Winter

Snow lays deep showing indentations of bird’s feet. From whence they come Where doest they go. Which way is home. written 25/10/2012

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/10/2012 6:00:00 PM

Seren, :-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed reading the poem you entered in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest. Always & Forever * PD

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/9/2012 5:45:00 PM

Ahh!!I like the description of nature..Enjoyed ..Congrats on your win..Sara

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/9/2012 6:12:00 PM

Thank you Sara

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/9/2012 2:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Seren , looking forward to your blog lol xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/9/2012 6:12:00 PM

Thanks Mandy.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2012 11:32:00 PM

Inventive poem and I love the title you used! congrats in the contest.

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/9/2012 6:12:00 PM

Many thanks Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/8/2012 11:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest Seren. Love, Carol

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/9/2012 6:11:00 PM

Thank you Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 11/7/2012 9:57:00 PM

This is beautiful. Many congrats for this win Seren.

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/9/2012 6:10:00 PM

Many Thanks

Joann Grisetti

Date: 11/7/2012 5:35:00 PM

congratulations!

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/7/2012 5:48:00 PM

nk you so much, haven't attempted writing like this before.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/25/2012 5:47:00 PM

awww' Spring is sprung the grass is riz I wonder where the birdies is? They say the bird is on the wing, ain't that absurd, I thought the wing was on the bird' was a fav of mine when little! Light & Love.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/25/2012 11:47:00 AM

Enjoyed your creative work..Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/25/2012 8:00:00 AM

This is so good Seren, such imagery...

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/25/2012 9:40:00 AM

Oh my havent attempted this sort of writing before, more into fun and basic stuff. Thanks for your comments. Seren