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Goethe's Path

Down this winding, ancient path; a loss of space and time This giant Sequoia forest with massive ferns displayed It seems a prehistoric place of age long left behind So peaceful yet so haunting, realizing not a sound is made No scattering squirrels or chirping birds, I know I'm all alone In this wondrous forest, time seems to have long ago forsaken Just a fleeting thought of danger then curiosity pressing me on Then pulsing neath my feet; the groung so faintly shaking The silence now so deafening; this makes no sense at all A welcomed thunder then I glimpse him coming through the trees The quake felt and the rumble heard; my predators huge footfalls Land of the lost this surely is, for T Rex stares at me I turn to run but now is gone the winding ancient path My fingers trace the invisible wall as I stand frozen in my fear Just right there, but out of reach; my bedroom and my bath A portal closed; perhaps a dream.. His breath felt on my ear

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Date: 7/13/2014 12:08:00 PM
wow, well done arlene, ! grats on your win :)
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/13/2014 1:21:00 PM
Thank you, sweet Casarah! hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/12/2014 4:04:00 PM
a poetic delight, arlene.. cheers to you for a well-deserved win!.. huggs
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/12/2014 9:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Nette. Such sweet comments! Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/12/2014 8:43:00 AM
Hi Arlene...I thought this would place well the first time I read it....just wonderful...thank you for the kind comments on mine as well
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/12/2014 9:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, David! Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/12/2014 4:40:00 AM
Wonderful write Arlene! Deserved great win my dear,, big congrats!
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/12/2014 8:33:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Upma! I always appreciate and look forward to your visits.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/11/2014 7:51:00 PM
Congrats Arlene, enjoyed the story you told.
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/11/2014 9:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Robert!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/11/2014 6:59:00 PM
Arlene, a lovely prehistorical take on the theme. Congrats for the win, my friend. Mohan
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/11/2014 7:39:00 PM
Thank you so much for visiting and the nice comment, Mohan my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/11/2014 2:53:00 PM
Well done! Congratulations, Arlene.
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/11/2014 5:20:00 PM
Thank you,Roy my friend! Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/11/2014 2:26:00 PM
congratulations my friend on your well deserved win, well done
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/11/2014 5:20:00 PM
Thank you, Frederic my friend! And thank you for your encouraging words on my comment to your poem The Sea.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/11/2014 1:08:00 PM
Whoa...this one is so good and so different; really enjoyed it, Arlene. Congratulations.
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/11/2014 5:18:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Faye! Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/11/2014 1:03:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Arlene !!! - Well done ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/11/2014 5:17:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Anne Lise!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/11/2014 12:38:00 PM
You make me remember of two movies I've watched with portals..:) great one friend Arlene..:)!kudos friend..:)
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Date: 7/11/2014 5:16:00 PM
Thank you, sweet Olive!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/11/2014 12:19:00 PM
What a unique take on this theme, Arlene! Love your imaginative write. Congrats on a deserved win! // paul
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/11/2014 5:15:00 PM
Thank you, Paul! Trying to think out of the box.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/11/2014 12:04:00 PM
Congrats on the win , Arlene, thnx for stopping by, enjoyed the imagery and it is a nice composition!
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/11/2014 5:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jag my friend! Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/10/2014 8:49:00 PM
Wow, Arlene, you're the real deal. Just love reading you. So entertaining. Peace. :)
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/10/2014 9:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Robert.. never thought of writing poetry. Ashamed to say I never read any either till on here except childrens nursery rhymes.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/6/2014 6:14:00 AM
Wow! very good, Arlene. Quite an imaginative tale. Thank God a T Rex is too big to fit through that portal. Well done my friend, An quite enjoyable to read.... Robert.
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/7/2014 2:18:00 PM
Thank you, Robert, my friend! Happy you enjoyed it! .. Hugs..Arlene
Date: 6/28/2014 3:02:00 PM
Love your slant on this Arlene..I also went with the ancient trees but with a bit less imagination than yours...nicely written..thanks also for the comment on my Positive Poem senyru
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/28/2014 4:12:00 PM
Thank you, David!.. I remember walking through this forest and making the comment to my family that it looked like a prehistoric place.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 6/28/2014 2:19:00 PM
a sense of imagination and creativity, loved it good luck in the contest
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/28/2014 2:25:00 PM
Thank you for taking time to read and comment, Frederic, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 6/28/2014 1:45:00 PM
Just saw your reply to me down here. Thanks for that!! I hope I can always try to think that way!!
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/28/2014 2:35:00 PM
Can't thank you enough for the way you made me feel welcome and offered to help me learn my away around, Andrea. I think you will always stay a step ahead of the crowd.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 6/27/2014 11:51:00 PM
Now this is Poetry! Loved this one!
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/28/2014 7:50:00 AM
Thank you SO much Arthur!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 6/27/2014 10:38:00 PM
oooh, that was GOOD and scary fun. I loved how you made it into a dream. So inventive.
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/28/2014 7:51:00 AM
Andrea, you are a master at thinking out of the box. Trying to learn from you!!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 6/27/2014 10:02:00 PM
a nightmare for sure....good imaginative thinking. SuZ
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/28/2014 7:53:00 AM
Thank you, Suzanne.. So nice of you to take time to stop by and comment. I will be reading from your list soon.. Hugs.. Arlene

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