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Goethe's Path

On this woodland trail, I must travel alone Crickets’ cries fade 'neath the morning sky The side path to our stream is now overgrown Sun climbs higher; I look up and cry, “Why?” Spirits of abandoned dreams resurrect In mist that hovers o’er the nearby marsh Phantoms of a life we tried to protect Through nature, locking out a world so harsh Our favorite picnic spot is just ahead Where rustling willow branches weep for you Lying beneath on nature’s leafy bed I long to feel you beside me here too I rest just a bit, then begin anew Even the birds seem to call out your name Given a chance, far better I would love you Without you, these woods do not seem the same *Written June 16, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/13/2014 12:06:00 PM
Wow, Great Carolyn, many hugs sweetie, grats on your win
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Date: 7/12/2014 8:00:00 PM
Hello Carolyn...Beautiful write...Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/12/2014 4:03:00 PM
nostalgia at its best, carolyn.. cheers to you for a well-deserved win!.. huggs
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Date: 7/12/2014 4:38:00 AM
Carolyn a deep n sad emotive superb write! Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 7/12/2014 12:02:00 AM
Carolyn, congrats for the lovely win. Mohan
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Date: 7/11/2014 2:52:00 PM
Well done, Carolyn! Congratulations! Cheers, Roy
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Date: 7/11/2014 1:27:00 PM
Sadly things and places are never quite the same again when we can't re-share them with our beloved ones. Beautiful write. // Congrats on your deserved win, Carolyn. // paul
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Date: 7/11/2014 1:06:00 PM
So beautiful, Carolyn...we grieve together for those precious who are lost from our lives. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/11/2014 1:01:00 PM
- Beautiful ... and touching, Carolyn! - Congratulations on your win ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/11/2014 12:33:00 PM
Very touching write Carolyn!! Congratulations ! :)
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Date: 7/11/2014 10:45:00 AM
Beautiful tribute to a lost love, Carolyn.. Congrats on a great win.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/11/2014 10:35:00 AM
Such longing, it's all too real my friend HUGS! Congrad's on your Win Light & Love
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Date: 6/25/2014 2:13:00 PM
At least you have sustained bright love in your loneliness, that's a gift. This is a truly beautiful scene of a heart grareful Carolyn. J.A.B.
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Date: 6/16/2014 8:32:00 AM
Great write Carolyn ....Seren
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Date: 6/16/2014 7:59:00 AM
How sad Carolyn..To take that path that you used to enjoy with your love. Now having to go it alone. Conjuring up so many memories...hugs Tim
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