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Goes Without Saying David Is the Comment Goliath

When comments are in Such short supply You can not even buy one Even if you we're not strapped for cash and had a pocket full of fivers And plenty room left to spare on your paid up credit card And then totally out of the blue 4 green comment bubble's appear out of nowhere Better than anything in your wildest dreams you could imagine That light up and you take to heart Like you have just won the lottery And make you feel like they are as close to 1 or know you as well as a member of your own family Leaving behind what can only be described as the smell of Sweet success joy eternal happiness Gratitude blessings and wishing nothing more Than to let them know And pay the comment or massive compliment back in spades So my kind sincere regards To you David Goliath Sir For making not my day , week , month or year But all of the above and so much more Word's alone fail me to do justice to explain

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Date: 10/5/2021 2:07:00 PM
I probably comment on your poems more than anyone else's on the soup Christopher, they have a dark endearing honest quality to them, probably too honest for some people, and that might scare them from commenting, we like to burst the delusional bubbles, but sometimes that is all people have left in their lives, it brings them comfort, and quite rightly so, I thank you for the poem cheers David
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 10/5/2021 3:06:00 PM
And yes you do Sir If it wasn't for you David What i write and post would be more comparable or better entries iin a journal or personal diary . So my thanks as again as always
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 10/5/2021 2:45:00 PM
Credit and gratitude to you Sir for actually caring enough to bother. Quality not quantity
Date: 10/3/2021 7:39:00 PM
Christopher, I write copious comments every day, but obviously I don't write to everyone. Many of us enjoy poems (yours included) and move on, especially if they are quite good and don't need comment. One thing's for sure...I'll remember the name from now on!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/4/2021 12:14:00 PM
Oh my! Well, thank you for the compliment, Christopher, but I'll have to work hard to measure up to it.
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 10/4/2021 9:10:00 AM
Cheers L..Milton Then may I say to as well Sir. Put you also in the Goliath category. Thanks for not only taking the time to read but pass comment as well
Date: 10/3/2021 6:08:00 PM
Dear Chris, I know how you feel, how nice it is when friends or poet members drop in and say hello, and leave a comment. I agree with you they are in short demand, the views are not lacking but the comments are. I wish more people took the time to leave a note. Thank you for sharing your heart felt thoughts. This deserved a comment :)
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 10/3/2021 6:22:00 PM
Cheers MRR See you totally get it. Likewise I wish more people like yourself took the time to comment. Doesn't take a lot of time or effort. Given the joy it can give or one can take from it Thanks indeed for your comment

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