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God's Special Creation

Breathed into your hair,
An everlasting prayer,
While you slept soundly.

I awoke to find,
Our bodies and souls entwined,
In love  profoundly.

Breathed into your hair,
A thanksgiving prayer,
While you slept softly.

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  1. Date: 2/24/2011 10:55:00 AM
    Congratulations Robert,on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 8:13:00 AM
    This is just wonderful, must be after the "love scene" in my one, congrats. Deirdre

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 5:01:00 AM
    Very nice my friend...congrats!!!

  1. Date: 2/18/2011 12:43:00 AM
    Many Congrats Robert for big win in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 11:56:00 PM
    Beautiful Senryu, dear Robert. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 9:06:00 PM
    I really like reading this one. It's lyrical and beautiful. Congratulations, Robert. HOw did I ever miss it?

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 5:44:00 PM
    This is wonderful Robert!Love it.Congrats on your well deserved win---kashinath

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 11:54:00 AM
    Really beautiful Robert, congratulations on your awesome win in Linda's contest ;-)

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 10:07:00 AM
    Hello Robert, This reads like a beautiful song! I love it Congratulations on your win As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 2/17/2011 9:46:00 AM
    Awww, this is very beautiful Robert! Congratulations on your fine win in the contest. I would have placed this higher as it is honest and beautiful. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 8:17:00 PM
    Such beauty in this sleep. Many congrats for this win.

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 7:45:00 PM
    Good presentation Bob. Congratulations on winning in Linda's contest with this.

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 7:27:00 PM
    Bob, a big congratulations on your honored place. agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 6:03:00 PM
    Congratulations onn the win in the contest of Linda, Robert

  1. Date: 2/16/2011 5:44:00 PM
    Congrats Robert on your success in my contest luv.. thankxx for your support .. this poem just warmed my soul ...

  1. Date: 2/7/2011 1:35:00 PM
    Nice pleasant picture , Robert

  1. Date: 2/7/2011 10:09:00 AM
    Such a lovely and uplifting senryu series, Robert. Everyone who's fortunate enought o have someone special sleeping beside them should offer "A thanksgiving prayer." Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/6/2011 9:57:00 PM
    A very sweet and well written Senryu, Robert! Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

  1. Date: 2/6/2011 6:05:00 PM
    Three very descriptive senryu here. Good work.