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God's Message To Man 2/2

God’s Message to Man 2/2 Man, O Man, I also gave you the most precious gifts of music and poetry, To drain out your hatred, dirt’s, anguish, agonies and pains, I gave you the wonderful childhood, the beauty of being in adolescence And the most sweet and splendid, the gift of being young, And to feel the strengths and pleasures of being young. I gave you wisdom and maturity, with the gift of knowledge sublime, Beyond every thing, the rare gift of music to sooth your throbbing heart. I also gave you, a bunch of beautiful Religions, beliefs and faiths, I gave you all these, so that you can enjoy the pleasures in Peace, I have given you every thing O Man, by which you could have made, A heaven on this beautiful earth. But Man, O Man, What in return, you have given to Your God, Only hatred, greed, violence, unrest without a sign of peace anywhere on earth But what has bothered Me a lot, Is your act of spoiling this beautiful earth You have spoiled every thing; I gave to you to make your life happy, So that you may live with peace and love, Should I take back every thing, I gave to you? Before you destroy this priceless wealth, by you acts. Think and rethink, O Man, The first thing which you should do Is to decrease your over burdening population, Or else I will have to do some thing to do so, It is never too late to improve yourself. Provided you can hear My Voice, O Humans Ravindra Kanpur India 20th April 2010 2010

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Date: 4/21/2010 11:53:00 AM
So much truth in your words. There are still a lot of good people in the world trying to do the right thing. In that, there is hope. Interesting approach in your poem. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 4/21/2010 4:04:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem and message! you have such a beautiful way, I read both parts, and I'm truly inspired, thank you for your kind comment, love Simone
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Date: 4/20/2010 7:36:00 AM
POWERFUL .. powerful message Ravindra and I luv the end verse very much... I am quite sure the God in Heaven feels this way many days .. its just a matter of time before He comes back to reclaim what He gave us to enjoy as we have so abused it.. appreciate your write and thoughts ... intense my friend..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/20/2010 7:17:00 AM
With all God has given us, we do need to express more appreciation by leading better lives and making the world a better place. This is a very moving epic poem, Ravindra. Well done! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/20/2010 7:08:00 AM
Well written have a nice one . p.d.
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