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God's Lullaby

hush whirring worries let calm and faith take over cradled in God's arms... *** July 27, 2010 for Linda's Soul Speaks senryu :)

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De R

Date: 8/25/2011 5:43:00 AM

Very calm and soothing poem to reflect your beliefs, nikko. It helps to think stop worrying. Liked that your started this senryu with 'hush'.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/30/2010 12:38:00 PM

Hey girl ...just stopping by to say 'hi' ...hope u have a happy weekend.. and good luck with your Twist contest... with luv..

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 7/29/2010 7:18:00 AM

beautiful!just warm and beautiful!C.C.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/29/2010 4:15:00 AM

Great faith write that is something that we all can hold onto if we just will or can ...Thanks for the comments on my poetry and blog..Sara

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/29/2010 3:39:00 AM

Hi Nikko, umaasa ako ikaw ay may isang magandang araw! Nice Senryu with beautiful words! Best of luck for Linda-Marie's contest!...Have a nice time!...Ingat!...Ger:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2010 6:22:00 PM

a fav

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2010 6:21:00 PM

Nikko, this reads beautifully. It is superb. I do not even know how you rated. but it looks like you won. Later I will check out all these wins. I sure hope to! Luv, Andrea