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Susan, a sweet little girl who was my sister, I watched as she passed on the snowy street, God himself came down from heaven for her. I was so devastated and my sorrow complete. I talked to God in prayers, Sadness, I lay at his feet, Tears, I placed in his hands, I knew he would understand. Up above is an angel dwelling, On clouds drifting she swings. ___________________________ June 10, 2015 Rhyme Submitted to the contest, Screwed IV, sponsor, Rob Carmack, 8th Place Submitted to the contest, His All Seeing Eyes, sponsor, Mystic Rose, NA

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Date: 8/12/2015 3:45:00 PM
Very , very nice poem and a nice win. thank you for stopping by my Sin City poem. I wrote it a few yrs ago after I seen a TV commercial. :)
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Date: 7/11/2015 12:28:00 PM
A beautiful, touching write, Constance! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/7/2015 6:20:00 PM
so glad to see this get placed in the contest :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/7/2015 4:17:00 PM
BW, congrats on your win:-)Alexis
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Date: 7/7/2015 3:02:00 PM
Hi Broken,, A lovely win, Love **SKAT**
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Date: 7/7/2015 2:07:00 PM
Broken, Congrats on your win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/7/2015 7:40:00 AM
So glad to see this one on the winners list.
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Date: 7/7/2015 3:54:00 AM
How sweet is this subtle write BW! Perfect 7 and big congrats!
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Date: 6/28/2015 3:01:00 PM
Broken Wings this poem touched my heart, one day you will see her again - live on and live for her she would want that for you - it is ok to miss our loved ones knowing that with every tear shed the sun will shine much brighter every day and then one day forever- your joy will be complete in every way! Love your sister in Christ Jesus - strangely enough my name is Susan also hmm?
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Date: 6/14/2015 9:40:00 AM
When you have a chance check out our group poem, it is now finished.
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Date: 6/14/2015 9:39:00 AM
Very moving!
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Date: 6/11/2015 10:54:00 PM
What a poignant and lovely entry for the contest Constance. This one can't help but be at the top of the winner's list! Blessings, Connie
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Date: 6/11/2015 8:17:00 AM
- I guess everyone who reads this poem will feel a tear in their eye - Beautiful written B.W. - I wish you good luck in the contest .... and a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/11/2015 7:43:00 AM
Is it true? What a heart rending write, Constance. Oh my....you really tugged at my heart strings. Sad...so sad....Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 6/11/2015 7:30:00 AM
I agree with Jan, heartbreaking and breathtaking, you have a wonderful way with words my friends, hugs
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Date: 6/11/2015 1:54:00 AM
oh simply heartbreaking and breathtaking at the same time - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7
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Date: 6/10/2015 11:32:00 PM
Your angel is watching over you now...lovely Tim
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