God's Love

Exhilaration Your majesty to unfold The gift of springtime

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Elijah Prophet

Date: 2/11/2012 8:51:00 PM

How strange that you would think of me as Elijah The Prophet, Laurie. Whaat if I told you that I was he. Would you believe God? Read Malachi the last chapter the 4th and 5th verse. Believe it or not. God Bless You precious Ivory Dove.

Date: 5/9/2009 12:38:00 PM

What a wonderful perspective of spring. Blessings to you for sharing this inspirational and uplifting poem with us. Thank you for your kincd words on my poem. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 4/30/2009 2:31:00 PM

Congrats on your win my friend, this was truly amazing..Best Wishes Always, Love Tyesha

Brandee Augustus

Date: 4/30/2009 1:11:00 PM

Bringing spring time back to the Creator? Seems obvious; but I would have never thought of that! Brilliant! Congratulations on your placement in the Springtime contest.

Lena Townsend

Date: 4/28/2009 4:08:00 PM

Great write. Congratulations on placing third in the Springtime contest. Smiles from Lolita

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 4/28/2009 11:26:00 AM

Congratulations on placing in the contest! ~Trudy~

Constance La France

Date: 4/28/2009 9:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win.

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/28/2009 9:34:00 AM

Congrats on placing third Laurie...Raul

Brian Strand

Date: 4/28/2009 8:57:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Carol's contest Laurie.Rgds Brian

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/28/2009 8:14:00 AM

Congratulations Miss Laurie....Now this one has excitement over springtime written all over it!!! :)...God's amazing gift!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/18/2009 3:53:00 PM

Very nice, Laurie, and true to the haiku format! Love, Carolyn

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/12/2009 4:10:00 AM

we're still waiting here in Mn. (-3 below this am!) sweet haiku! Laurie, thx for comments, I had that dream every nite for 6yrs. when I was a little boy, everyone in my family would hear me wake with a start in the middle of the night, call out to me, "are you ok?" & go back to sleep! Jim

John Rhinem

Date: 3/11/2009 8:42:00 AM

Smile~And of course, "I saved the best for last, but, by far, not the least!!!!~Smile~"I Love Your Faith Laurie!!!!"~To myself~"It makes 'You' stand out even brighter among the crowd!!!"~It has been a sincere joy and pleasure visiting with "You" today dear gifted lady!!!! And, I look forward to it very soon again!!!~"My Love To You & Your Loves Always, John!!!"~"Have A Very Beautiful Day!!!"~Bye Dear!:):)

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/10/2009 9:23:00 PM

Dear Laurie,This is a very Beautiful Expression of YOUR muti-TALENTED POETIC ARTISTRY ALWAYS YOURS...HG LAURIE, YOUR comment "Write on young(OLD) Esquire, write on" I did I ask YOU to Read my POEM "The Heart of a POET -- Speaks (Part 2) I would like YOUR thoughts on it ALWAYS...HG

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/9/2009 1:33:00 AM

Beautifully written, nice haiku...Raul

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 3/8/2009 11:40:00 PM

Hello Laurie, this is a well-penned Haiku. I love this short form of a poem. Keep on sharing. Ernilando

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/8/2009 6:40:00 PM

Dear Laurie, Excellent Spring Haiku Good Luck in the contest I have a couple of Haiku that one word is 5 syllables This is truely Perfect in all aspects of Haiku ALWAYS...HG Laurie I read your comment on Ruben O's POEM "Caramel--Dulce de Leche"First off I am a man that knows how to cook 30 years as a Chef 15 more learning the trade the recipe Ruben gave is more of a Bread Pudding a true Dulce de Leche takes at least a week to be perfected I also teach Culinary Arts in College Yours...HG

Arany P.

Date: 3/8/2009 5:07:00 AM

absoluetly true... you are no exception yourself, you poems reflect life... and thats how i like... this haiku is wonderful!! ~ Arany

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 3/8/2009 1:45:00 AM

Beautiful, inspiring and magestic, well done. :) Did you figure out the centering thing? Love, Kristin

Marie Prance

Date: 3/7/2009 6:14:00 PM

Everything coming back to life,Gods creationwhat a beautiful sight< Marie

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/7/2009 6:09:00 PM

We're all longing for spring are we not? This is nice. Thanks for your comments. Love, Joyce

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/7/2009 12:06:00 PM

Exactly the way I was feeling outside today! (Wish I wrote this!) Simply beautiful! Love, Shar

Date: 3/7/2009 11:48:00 AM

Wonderful uplifting and inspirational poem. Beautiful! Blessings to you for sharing it. Karen

Ronald Bingham

Date: 3/7/2009 10:53:00 AM

A beautiful poem, and you cannot out do God's handy work. spring is proof in the puddin. Blessings, Ron

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/7/2009 10:48:00 AM

This beautiful my friend..Love the title and the words breathe spring.