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God's little poet

He poked his head
betwix mine write
for the likes of I
to address his query;

"Do I blend in
do my words

The tears 

Copyright © James Peranteau

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  1. Date: 1/10/2013 7:53:00 PM

  1. Date: 10/14/2010 8:29:00 PM
    James,"wow! your spell bounding words are captured perfect in this poem. A little sad with happy spirited emotions to go through. Amazing with them deep thoughts. But, like you said at the end, ( the tears fell )I really did enjoyed the ending. take care,..p.d.

  1. Date: 9/15/2010 8:33:00 PM
    Perfect imagery of your little angel wanting to share time with you, James..This tugs at my heart, so. Definitely a fav. Blessings to you and yours, always. Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 9/5/2010 9:12:00 AM
    This is a favorite of mine.. So much captured James.

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 2:38:00 PM
    Was so nice a terrific read.Thanks for congrats on my win.Teresa

  1. Date: 8/10/2010 10:36:00 AM
    Alas...Babel! These old farts just don't understand us young fellers. James! Where art thou. Been lookin' for that humor. Dave

  1. Date: 8/3/2010 7:41:00 PM
    Oh James.. I do remember when my sons used to do the same to me.. I have two who continue to write now and then.. even as adults...but they always had to write when Mommy wrote.. can totally relate to those tears my friend.. we miss u..with luv..

  1. Date: 8/3/2010 5:23:00 PM
    proud popa. John Henry Loving III

  1. Date: 7/28/2010 6:26:00 PM
    Awwww, so sweet, James!

  1. Date: 7/24/2010 9:56:00 AM
    when the spirit speaks....

  1. Date: 7/22/2010 10:11:00 AM
    That would be little Noah,and I know he's gonna be an excellent writer,even better than his pops,a kiss for Noah!

  1. Date: 7/13/2010 7:02:00 AM
    A beautiful read. Also thank you for your kind words on my latest if you have time please check out my saga, criminal part 3- ofcourse its not true just a story. Have a great day.

  1. Date: 7/10/2010 7:13:00 AM
    Great poem. Still leaves me wondering how many kids one has to go through before they start their emotional bond together. Sometimes They Come Back!

  1. Date: 7/9/2010 2:01:00 PM
    I can see a chip of the old block coming. The apple doesn’t fall too far from the tree, as we all see. I like the family love and father/son unity demonstrated in this poem. Keep the quill flowing. Great job! Joseph

  1. Date: 7/9/2010 10:56:00 AM
    Oh, I can just hear Noah asking you if he "blends in," James. If I were you, I'd tell him, "No, son, you stand out!" Somehow children feel the need to fit in even more than adults do. Dry those tears and give him a hug for me! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 7/9/2010 8:50:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading...

  1. Date: 7/9/2010 5:10:00 AM
    Not exactly sure of the interpertation of this one....Enjoyed reading though...May your pen of creativity flow with the gift of inspiration and touch on the lives of many in a positive way in the years to come ..Thanks for stopping by and reading my work and the humor in your comment about the scoot over let you sit down...It blessed my spirit..Have a blessed day! Sara

  1. Date: 7/8/2010 7:55:00 PM
    hummmm. i got a mental picture of this... very interesting!!!!!

  1. Date: 7/8/2010 7:02:00 PM
    Such an emotional write James.. can just see the scene in my mind.. touching and heartfelt.. having four sons of my own.. I can totally relate.. enjoy while young..they grow up so fast... with luv..