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God's Kind of Poetry

GOD'S KIND OF POETRY I love you, don't you feel? Have faith. Trust me. I am here, I am real. I love you 'til the ends of the earth to the bottom of my heart.. From minute dusts, I adjust forming you with my own bear hands Appointing you to be on high command over animals, plants and all others I planned I love you, don't you feel? Have faith. Trust me. I am here, I am real. I trust you much I let you run and roam I got upset you chose lure than obedience But, I love you so so much that I am still here a father waiting for you to come home Arms spread wide ready to embrace you tight Aching to show you more of my love and light I love you, don't you feel? Have faith. Trust me. I am here, I am real. I know you have been on trash or myriad tests to which sometimes you're on bended knee with tears Asking; Swearing; Doubting me when bad surprises cascade soak then thoroughly bathe you... Don't you know that while you are in this... I am listening to your shake and tremble I am there next to you, sobbing too.. I am hoping for you to remember ME. I am hoping for you to call my name. As I am eager, so eager, to share your burden I am ardent, so ardent, to make you smile. I love you, don't you feel? Have faith. Trust me. I am here, I am real. I love you much that if needed I will sacrifice With all I am, I will draw you nearer to me Not with golden armory of might or power but with the Spirit, I have sent to be with you to remind you that I am here, always with you. Just don't you forget to seek me and my Words. I love you, don't you feel? Have faith. Trust me. I am here, I am real. (c)Olive Eloisa 10:54 pm September 09, 2014 *** inspired by one of my favorite Christian song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j37Oz1lmnfU and Romans 8:37-39: No, in all these things we are more than conquerors through him who loved us. For I am sure that neither death nor life, nor angels nor rulers, nor things present nor things to come, nor powers, nor height nor depth, nor anything else in all creation, will be able to separate us from the love of God in Christ Jesus our Lord.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/2/2015 7:33:00 PM

Hi Olive, stopping by this one again, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment (the old one, lol) . Love LINDA

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/24/2014 8:21:00 PM

"I am eager, so eager to share your burden..." to me, that's the affirmation of the mighty love and guidance Olive. We can't see or feel what we do not believe. Facts and love and marvelous truth can be upon us and still we be grossly ignorant if our hearts are too dumb. Truth bears no fruit for those unprepared to eat of it. Your relationship with God is warm and inspiring. I'm sure that God is proud of your poetry Olive...J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/25/2014 7:03:00 AM

What you said is true...but the good thing is God is so patient to us and faithful that He will do everything for us....:) though one verse in the Bible telling us "harden not your hearts...:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/23/2014 8:26:00 PM

Hello Olive, .. Can I call you, Olive Oil, since you like calling me Lollie Linda, in which I enjoy... :) Hey, I'm having such a long day, I got a few contests, I'm putting out tonight, so here I am wondering what kind of poem you have for this contest... I love how you imply your faith here. A wonderful poem, and entry. Good luck...LINDA

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/25/2014 6:58:00 AM

:) this poem is a two way poem... If you see it in a one point you will say that it's all about me but on the other hand it may also be God's own poem--- what I mean is that God is love .. In each stanza, I portray God as a Creator, all powerful, a Father, a Friend, all merciful, the Holy Spirit by the 2 lines in my repeating refrain and lastly the Son who sacrificed His life..:)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/23/2014 1:09:00 AM

outstanding piece love how you drew this with the greatest light

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/23/2014 1:19:00 AM

Thanks much...:)

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 9/21/2014 9:30:00 PM

Superlatively written Olive with an awesome spirit felt. I enjoyed your entry. GL in the contest. Verlena

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/23/2014 1:17:00 AM

Thanks much Verlena..:) appreciate your visit..:)

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/21/2014 2:29:00 PM

This is a jewel to be seen and read my friend. A lovely write and great testament to a true faith in the Holy Trinity.. Bravo!!!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/22/2014 1:59:00 AM

thanks much Robert... :) God bless you.

James Fraser

Date: 9/21/2014 9:05:00 AM

Certainly a write from the Heart Olive, and you sure have heart for your Faith, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/22/2014 1:58:00 AM

Thanks James.. :D I have.. :) God bless you..

Paul Callus

Date: 9/21/2014 7:22:00 AM

Faith and trust are the main ingredients of this touching lyrical write; we are formed by His "own bare hands" the same hands that are always available to carry us through difficult times. Take care and hugs // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 9/21/2014 2:35:00 PM

Of course....love :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/21/2014 9:01:00 AM

you forgot about love :P

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/21/2014 9:00:00 AM

Thanks much Paul.. :) God bless you too.. :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 9/20/2014 5:51:00 PM

When I come across the contest, I don't know where to start... Then comes this muse while I reflect that from the beginning He has shown us His love, it is out of love that we are made, out of his unfailing love from our faults: He saved us.. Around, it speaks of His love and from so many verses in the Bible He says his like to music hence I chose it in lyrical form..:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/20/2014 3:57:00 PM

Great work that speaks of your faith in the Great I Am..Wonderful work..Thanks for the visit to my blog..Long time I ago I was just down in the pits of despair and deep within me I heard this gentle small voice say "I love you"..He does love us even when we don't love ourselves..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/21/2014 1:51:00 AM

:) thank you.. :) it speaks in many ways though.. :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/20/2014 10:35:00 AM

What a beautiful testament to your faith, Olive...So beautiful...in every way. Yes, this is truly His voice. :) Hugs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/21/2014 1:49:00 AM

Thanks Eileen.. :) Blessed day.. :D