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God's Grace

A small fat woman prone at the feet of the world Waiting for another footprint on her forehead Flat, a deflated worn out balloon A shell tossed aside because she’s broken So many scraps and things piled into a trash bag Abandoned in a landfill Pour out the rain That woman floats away on a river of tears Her own and everyone else’s He hears our prayers She is a twig of a tree snapped off in the storm He lifts her up in waves of cleansing water Dunking her down, drowning her sorrows Back up for inhalation and exhalation, His breath, inspiration His hands mend her wounds Quilts her again into the fabric of His world He sets her feet on gold and no one treads on her anymore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/10/2008 11:18:00 AM
aww I love this poem it reminds me of me before I found the Lord, I too was like a door mat and trodden all over, so much brokenness in my life but now I have everything, the Lrod made me complete, thanks for you wonderful feed back on my poems God Bles you from diane
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Date: 10/1/2008 7:52:00 AM
I'll be 48 and I am sure nervous about it. I thank you for your comment because I do love to learn - I hope I haven't offended you in any way you can ask just about anyone on the site about me I've been here a couple of years - I love your spiritual poetry - God Bless
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Date: 10/1/2008 7:46:00 AM
Autumn this poem has a very profound message - You know I found the Lord in Prison and most of my life I spent frying every brain cell that I had - The point I'm making if you wouldn't mind being more specific as to errors in my poems it would give me a chance to correct them and also learn - When the Lord called on me to start writing Poetry at the age of 41 in a solitary prison cell I could barely spell my own name - I am enrolled to start back to school in January cont.
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Date: 9/29/2008 2:43:00 PM
with very best of ratings of course!! (sorry I forgot)
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Date: 9/29/2008 2:42:00 PM
So glad you posted this and that you plan on reading it-- it's one of my favorite poems by you ("a bruised reed He shall not break..") Love, Cindy
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