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A living thing I am- a flower of God's earth. I see His flowers in the field; the God that fashioned them created me. From seed to bud to ripened fruit I feel the cycle shared together in the plan of His Creation, perfect and sublime. A living thing I am- a creature of God's earth. I see His creatures of the wild; I can relate to them, their inborn ways, evolve as they in nature's outlined scheme- of life and death, survival in between, reflecting the sure balance of His plan. The flowers, animals, and I, are one, constructed by His wisdom and His love. But I, with Human Soul, for certain, am most blessed and wealthiest by far. For He has given me the gifts of Faith- with Hope, and Love, to share unselfishly with all. A special thing I am- a child of God. September 12, 2015 ~1st Place~ Contest: Poetry Writing #1 Sponsor: Broken Wings Judged: 12/18/2015 The form I used for this poem is called "Blank Verse." This form is similar to Iambic Pentameter because it is written with 10 syllables and 5 feet per line. However, no rhyme scheme is used. Stanzas do not have a set number of lines, and breaks can be anywhere within the poem where a new thought begins, much like starting a new paragraph. Blank Verse poems may be any length. Many of Shakespeare's works were written in Blank Verse. I like this form because the poet's thoughts are not restricted by using rhymes. But still, there is wonderful cadence and rhythm with the use of the iambic meter, and the words flow and read very smoothly in a poetic fashion if written well.

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Date: 12/19/2015 5:39:00 AM
Sandra heartfelt and true. Beautiful. Congratulations on your win!!
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Date: 12/21/2015 8:36:00 AM
Michael, thanks again for stopping by with our uplifting comments and congrats. Sandra
Date: 12/18/2015 10:22:00 PM
Wow great take with this lovely form Sandra.. glad having learnt this new form i will hv to try.. Congrats on big win!
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Date: 12/21/2015 8:37:00 AM
Thanks, Dr. Upma, for you nice comment and congrats. Blank Verse is a great form. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/18/2015 9:32:00 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your sweet win Luv **SKAT**
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Date: 12/21/2015 8:38:00 AM
Thank you, Skat, for your comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/18/2015 9:16:00 PM
Sandra, CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN.... LINDA
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Date: 12/21/2015 8:39:00 AM
Hi Linda, thank you so much! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/18/2015 5:19:00 PM
You never disappoint and a special thing you are indeed. Congrats.
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Date: 12/21/2015 8:34:00 AM
Rob, thank you so much for your supportive and complimentary comment. I appreciate it so much. Merry Christmas and a healthy and Happy New Year to you. Sandra
Date: 12/18/2015 4:18:00 PM
PERFECT example of blank verse, dear. It's a wonderful form. BIG congrats for your win.
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Date: 12/21/2015 8:38:00 AM
Thanks so much, Andrea. I appreciate your visits and supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/18/2015 2:19:00 PM
A beautiful flow to your lines - it is a form I am not familiar with - a delightful write Sandra congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/14/2015 9:48:00 AM
Bravo Miss Haight. I adore Blank Verse, and folks not familiar with Iambic Pentameter miss out on this special language (which we speak but most can't write or have not attempted)......I loved how you were able to continue in iamb even with carryover lines, and the conclusion is the foundation for the entire discourse. Reading this was like riding a horse in perfect canter, and that is how iambic prosody "feels." Beautiful stuff. oops....stuff = poetry for me. Thomas
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/15/2015 10:56:00 AM
Hi Thomas, thank you so much for your uplifting and supportive comments. Yes, I do notice that not many use this form when I feel that it offers so much. I am pleased that you understand it well, and I feel honored that you enjoyed my poem. Your visit is much appreciated! Have a great day! Sandra
Date: 12/13/2015 4:56:00 AM
Interesting form - I enjoyed your words about it and the poem is a moving, touching, prayer-like gift ... CayCay
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Date: 12/13/2015 3:53:00 PM
Thank you, CayCay. Yes, I chose Blank Verse for Broken Wings' form contest. It is one of my favorites. I appreciate your lovely comments. Hugs, Sandra

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