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Gods Coloring Book

Miranda Lambert written on: 4/22/11 While driving down the interstate A random stop brought me here today Where, painted mountains touch the sky and, Heaven's reflection on the water will stay Serene surroundings from petal to bark Just a peak of God's coloring book Under a brush is where I'll lie To a sky of royal blue I'll look Saffron Daisies tickle my nose While a cascaded breeze around me blows A scenic day in midst July The time right here gracefully flows.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/15/2011 8:46:00 PM
beautifully written..
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Date: 6/3/2011 7:59:00 PM
beautiful, very well put together
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Date: 5/24/2011 8:48:00 AM
Truly beautiful imagery. Thanks, Miranda - your contest was great fun : )
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Date: 5/16/2011 10:35:00 AM
Hi Randa :) Totally enjoyed how you depicted nature as God's coloring book :) made me smile, how inspiring :) & thank you so much for your wonderful comments in my poem :)
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Date: 5/16/2011 10:35:00 AM
Congrats on your placement :)
Date: 5/16/2011 7:16:00 AM
thankxx Miranda for your congrats on my winning poem GLOW ..hope all is well with u my friend..how are those two little darlings? luv.
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Date: 5/9/2011 4:02:00 PM
Such beauty painted in words Miranda with this rare beauty of a poem.. God's coloring book is amazing ... hope u enjoyed a lovely Mother's Day with those beautiful baby boys luv..
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Date: 5/4/2011 10:10:00 AM
Nice 7th place..you "placed" so it's all good ;) Jimmy
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Date: 4/27/2011 4:16:00 PM
Very descriptive work..Enjoyed reading..Congrats...Sara
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Date: 4/27/2011 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest, Miranda
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Date: 4/27/2011 8:41:00 AM
Great to see your success in the top ten with this great poem Miranda. Congratulations on your special entry's grace. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/26/2011 8:25:00 PM
Miranda, The idea of daisies tickling your nose makes the reader feel as though he/she is as close to the image as you are in writing it. With our creator's love for children and the simple heart, the coloring book fits nicely. Are the results in yet? Bet u did well. Gwendolen
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Date: 4/26/2011 4:11:00 PM
Now aren't you glad you got off the interstate to enjoy God's artistry, Miranda? Well done. Congratulations on your success in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/26/2011 1:37:00 PM
Many congrats on your win, Randa : ) I had to laugh when you said he really did want a kitten LOL
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations Randa on your win in the John Moses Freeman's contest "Rubaiyat". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:37:00 PM
Congrats Miranda on your wonderful win in John's contest with this perfect poem using the new form so well my friend..lovely piece.. enjoy your top ten sweet success with luv..
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:26:00 PM
Many congratulations on your seventh place win Miranda with this lovely poetry (((( applause )))) well done.....:) smiles
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations on 7th place win with this beauty. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Caryl
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:04:00 AM
This is very good and flows nicely..cory
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