God's Children

God’s Children Kindred hearts Showing love. Forgiving. Inspired by reflections on the Holy Bible © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 3, 2010 Poetic form: Senryu

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James Fraser

Date: 3/5/2010 7:01:00 PM

Lovely write to your faith Dane Ann, i am not a religious person. But i do have to say that i thank you ever so much for your ever kind words. It does look like i will be a stranger from the soup from the end of this month, infinitive >> its been lovely >> all the very best >> Chowa .... from the Highlander >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/3/2010 12:57:00 PM

Beautiful description, Dane Ann. I checked the definition of senryu and although it says the structure is similar to the haiku, it gives an example with a syllable-scheme that does not match the traditional haiku. So you are the master!! Again, I bow to you. Love, Carolyn