God Smiles

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~God Smiles~ (Free Verse) Sunrise comes out of sudden And with it departs the night And I see your smile again When I come out and see the sun The waters, the waves at sea Brings forward the lights around And I see all the little children And Him that smiles always kind Flowers bloom everywhere under his care Sunshine with its beauty graces the eyes And I see again his loving grin And him just smiles always kind The misterious moon and all the bright stars All dance around playing tribute to God And then I see another day and night And that wonderful smile and smile back to God! Dorian Petersen Potter aka Ladydp2000 copyright@2015 January,17,2015

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Arlene Smith

Date: 1/20/2015 3:41:00 AM

Stunning, Dorian!!... It does seem like God smiling on us when we see the beauty he has created..... Rejoicing with you, dear friend.. Hugs... Arlene

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/10/2015 10:57:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Arlene,for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated, dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely evening! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

Skat A

Date: 1/17/2015 9:31:00 PM

WOW~ SKAT ~

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/10/2015 10:56:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Skat,for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated, dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely evening! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 1/17/2015 6:00:00 PM

Breathtaking! So much inspiring scenery in this tribute to God. I'll bet His smile sure is bright!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/10/2015 10:56:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Isaiah,for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated, dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely evening! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/17/2015 12:32:00 PM

You have a glorious eyes to see the smile of God everywhere in beauties. Lovely done, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/10/2015 10:55:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, BL, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated, my dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely evening! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/17/2015 12:32:00 PM

A touching and gentle poem that portrays the adoration and acceptance of God, man and nature merged. Emile.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/10/2015 10:50:00 PM

Thank you so kindly Emile, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated, dear friend! Wishing you a very lovely evening! In His light! God bless you! :) D.