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God Saw a Prize

My world a chasm of utter darkness Dreariness enveloped me like a cloud Bound by chains in an abandoned fortress Tormented body - a field freshly plowed Accomplishments ignored; voice never heard Wondered why on earth was I even born Treated like clipped wings of a fallen bird Ripped to shreds, I could no longer be torn Unsettling to be taunted by others When all you do is exemplify love Why is it so hard to love one another As commanded by the Savior above I tried so hard to find favor in their sight All efforts were unfavorably received I began to pray and was bathed in light Chains started falling, my sentence reprieved God looks at me and sees a worthy prize The Lord loves all of his children the same I’m no longer concerned about man’s eyes Ill-conceived judgments nor secular names The name of the Lord is a strong tower His mighty name is worthy to be praised I thank him for his redemptive power For being my light on the darkest of days In times of despair God spoke from above Through His Word, He counseled and He advised Keep His commandments - Keep walking in love I am His, I am loved, and I am a prize!

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Date: 1/17/2019 10:28:00 AM
Very touching poem. Although you said it is free verse, I enjoyed the rhythm of the rhyme. :)
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Date: 1/13/2019 6:51:00 PM
Very inspiring & uplifting write.
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Date: 1/4/2019 7:59:00 AM
Hi Valerie, dropping by with belated congratulations on your Poem Of the Day honour with this wonderful write. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/5/2019 9:27:00 AM
Thank you so very much for your kind response. God bless you and keep you!
Date: 1/3/2019 1:09:00 AM
Wonderful verse, Valerie. Congratulations on POTD! Hugs Eve
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/3/2019 9:50:00 PM
Thank you! I am so pleased you like it.
Date: 1/2/2019 9:57:00 PM
Superbly done Valerie ...Congrats!!! on POTD!..love & light...^WW^
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/2/2019 10:05:00 PM
Thank you so very much. Wishing you a Happy, healthy New Year! God bless you and keep you.
Date: 1/2/2019 9:39:00 PM
"The Lord loves all of his children the same" I completely agree. This is deep, powerful and emotional. Your thoughts touch my heart. You are such an inspiration to us all. Congratulations Valerie, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/2/2019 9:49:00 PM
Thank you so very much! God bless you and keep you. Happy New Year!
Date: 1/2/2019 12:40:00 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Valerie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/2/2019 12:47:00 PM
Thank you so very much Anne-Lise! Happy New Year!
Date: 1/2/2019 11:49:00 AM
Your poem expresses beautifully how we are all in the same family and what a blessing it is to know of God's love. Your lovely poem is very deserving of the honor of POTD Valerie. Congratulations! Very nice to meet you. Aloha, Connie
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/2/2019 12:35:00 PM
Thank you Connie for your warm sentiment. God bless you and keep you!
Date: 1/2/2019 10:28:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Valerie. So well deserved. Warmest Wishes~ Warren
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/2/2019 11:10:00 AM
Thank you Warren! Happy New Year!
Date: 1/2/2019 9:53:00 AM
The journey of your insightful introspective brings us to a beautiful destination, Valerie. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors for your brilliant poem. Warmest wishes for a happy new year.. ~Susan
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/2/2019 11:13:00 AM
Thank you Susan for such kind words. Wishing you and your love ones a Happy New Year!
Date: 1/2/2019 9:43:00 AM
Wonderful, inspirational to everyone who might be seen as "different." Congratulations!
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/2/2019 11:05:00 AM
Thank you so very much!
Date: 1/2/2019 9:12:00 AM
A wonderful poem, Valerie, so glad you found strength in the Lord. Congrats on POTD. John
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/2/2019 11:04:00 AM
Thanks you so very much. God bless you!
Date: 1/2/2019 9:01:00 AM
Excellent! Congratulations on your honor...
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/2/2019 10:50:00 AM
Thank you so very much. Happy New Year!
Date: 1/2/2019 8:58:00 AM
Yes my dear...A lovely write...Praise be to God...Congratulations Valerie...All the best for 2019
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/5/2019 9:29:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind response. God bless you and keep you!
Date: 1/2/2019 7:47:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD Valerie :)
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/2/2019 10:49:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Happy New Year!
Date: 1/2/2019 7:21:00 AM
Beautifully written, Valerie, people who mistreat others have issues that don't belong to you. Forgiveness is grace and these words prove you have an abundance of that; it is precious.
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/2/2019 7:34:00 AM
Thanks Phil. I appreciate your feedback. God bless you and keep you!
Date: 1/2/2019 7:07:00 AM
Congrats Valerie on POTD--so well deserved!
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/2/2019 7:36:00 AM
Thank you! Happy New Year!
Date: 1/2/2019 7:00:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful, Valerie. Congratulations on POTD...Happy New Year...Charlie
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/2/2019 7:43:00 AM
Thank you Charlie! Your opinion is greatly appreciated. Happy New Year!
Date: 1/2/2019 6:41:00 AM
Wonderful poem Valerie, congratulations on POTD, happy New Year! xomo
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/2/2019 6:45:00 AM
Thank you so very much for the sentiment. Happy New Year!
Date: 1/2/2019 6:10:00 AM
well said my friend, congratulations on POTD well deserved for this poem, Happy New Year!!
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/2/2019 6:39:00 AM
Thank you Bobby for your reply. Wishing you a blessed New Year.
Date: 1/1/2019 7:37:00 AM
Brilliant poetry Valerie..
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Valerie Staton
Date: 1/1/2019 7:40:00 AM
Thank you, my friend. Happy New Year!

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