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In 2020 Kayne West says he plans to run for President Oh heaven help you all Kim Kardashian for first lady I wonder…. Will her first request be To pain the White House… PINK God Bless America 31st August 2015

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Date: 9/16/2015 2:14:00 AM
Wonderful write n win Jan! Big Congrats !
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/16/2015 2:50:00 AM
Thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/15/2015 9:34:00 PM
I hope it never happens... Hahaha.. congrates hugs eve
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Date: 9/16/2015 2:49:00 AM
Me too Eve:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/15/2015 4:03:00 PM
Lol... i hope it never happens... congrats
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Date: 9/15/2015 4:13:00 PM
I hope so too:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/15/2015 2:56:00 PM
Oh my, perish the thought, Jan! Congrats on your placement for this fun write! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/15/2015 3:00:00 PM
LOL Sandra let's hope it NEVER happens!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/15/2015 2:22:00 PM
Jan, nice win. SKAT
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2015 2:28:00 PM
Thanks Skat - let hope it never happens!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/15/2015 7:19:00 AM
A pink white house, now that would be a hoot...thank you for adding this neat little write into my contest Hugs xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2015 11:30:00 AM
Its a recent poem in August Cas so one of my least commented on writes so it is great to get more exposure via your contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/15/2015 6:12:00 AM
Great write Jan. A well deserved win. Congratulations.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2015 11:29:00 AM
Thanks so much Michael:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/10/2015 9:31:00 PM
Oh my goodness with the way the world is today I would not be surprised at all ....Lord have mercy on us its a strange possibility who knows...Nice write lolz-Love Ettie
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/11/2015 2:49:00 AM
Lets hope it never happens!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/8/2015 6:16:00 PM
You are just too funny. We are in the process of being taken over by something strange.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2015 1:04:00 AM
Thanks Duke I love to write with humour and this story couldn't pass me by - gosh it would be a nightmare:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/7/2015 2:41:00 AM
Well thats if I am not arrested tonight, if I am here tomorrow I guess is ok! LOL
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/7/2015 8:20:00 AM
I hope you are always around my friend soup would be a very dull place without you:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/7/2015 2:37:00 AM
Oh Don't you go worrying yourself about saving America, Donald trump is here!!!! and when I assassinate him, I will save America!!!! LOL Loved this!
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/7/2015 8:20:00 AM
LOl King Arthur will rise again:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/3/2015 7:44:00 AM
pink is lovely... JAmes said I look really pretty in pink.. weeew! but white house in pink wahhhhhh! :D!!! !~Olive Eloisa =')
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2015 7:48:00 AM
LOlL you are a stunner whatever you wear Olive:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/1/2015 5:21:00 PM
Funny one, Jan! I sincerely hope it won't get as bad as this!! :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/1/2015 5:26:00 PM
Let's hope it never happens!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/1/2015 9:58:00 AM
Heard one Republican candidate suggest they put up a wall between the U.S. and Canada (approx. 5,000 mi???) If he gets elected, I will be one of the first on the work crew!!! LOL Love, Jack xxx
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Date: 9/7/2015 2:39:00 AM
Well its a serious matter, no joke, why I heard late at night a few Canadian pine trees are sneaking across the border!!
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/1/2015 1:33:00 PM
LOL:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/31/2015 4:29:00 PM
Hahaha! This is nightmarish, Jan! If she makes it there every US president will be turning in his grave! As for wasps, they still give me the creeps to this day. Never got stung by one, mostly what we call yellow jackets. Thanks for the stop by and best to you. / M
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/31/2015 4:36:00 PM
It really doesn't bear thinking about - tongue in cheek humour ... but you can just imagine it can't you. I too have never been stung by a wasp -I still detest them:-( Hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/31/2015 3:19:00 PM
yayyy... and miley cyrus as VP; now we have an MTV oval office!.. so enjoyed, jan!.. huggs
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/31/2015 3:36:00 PM
Just a fun write Nette - if they can have a publicity stunt I will get a poem lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/31/2015 10:26:00 AM
Dear JAN, LOL!! nice... enjoyed the humour.....In India we have pink city called jaipur(state of Rajasthan) because of most of its buildings painted pink i just remembered.....but White house in pink........GOD should save! it ll never happen...love, Anu:)
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/31/2015 11:34:00 AM
Tongue in cheek humour here but I can JUST imagine it happening lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/31/2015 5:49:00 AM
Good Humor, mixed with sarcasm. Enjoyed reading
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/31/2015 5:56:00 AM
Let's hope it never happens lol:-) hugs Jan xx

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