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God Pleiades

God Pleiades Goodness in abundance Generous without fault Grandiose by nature Greatness never excelled Galactic Sovereign Gladness in the heavens Gavel in hand judges. 2nd attempt at a Pleiades it's difficult but I enjoy it, hope you do too. First Place Winner John Derek Hamilton November 22,2015

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2020 10:32:00 PM

aha, I clicked on a page really far back and found your first pleiades. Whatever happened to those contests? I remember they got about halfway through the alphabet and ended. A very belated congrats for this one, Good job.

John Hamilton
Date: 7/2/2020 9:04:00 AM

Wow Andrea you went back in a time machine for this one, thanks for your kind visit!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/30/2015 3:14:00 AM

Congrats John.. wonderful write!!

John Hamilton
Date: 11/30/2015 5:40:00 AM

Thanks Dr, always appreciate your visits, and comments.JDH

Skat A

Date: 11/28/2015 3:25:00 PM

John, Congrats on your fine win, SKAT LOVE

John Hamilton
Date: 11/28/2015 8:49:00 PM

Thanks Skat for your visits and comments, always appreciated. JDH

Lin Lane

Date: 11/28/2015 7:12:00 AM

Congratulations, John...now you must continue writing Pleiades.

John Hamilton
Date: 11/28/2015 8:48:00 PM

Thanks Lin I think I will! John

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 11/28/2015 5:14:00 AM

Congratulations John

Eve Roper

Date: 11/27/2015 8:30:00 PM

John, I like the subject you chose nicely written and congratulations on your 1st place win. Eve

John Hamilton
Date: 11/27/2015 10:47:00 PM

Thanks Eve really appreciate your visit and talent. JDH

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/27/2015 6:08:00 PM

You excelled with this John! Congratulations on your super win!

John Hamilton
Date: 11/27/2015 10:45:00 PM

Thanks Connie I appreciate your kind visit and comments. JDH

Jan Allison

Date: 11/27/2015 4:47:00 PM

you did great for a second attempt John congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton
Date: 11/27/2015 10:42:00 PM

Thanks Jan very kind. John

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/27/2015 3:21:00 PM

John, this one snuck in but I'm glad it did! A great acknowledgement of God's attributes! Congrats on your 1st place win and in learning a new poetry form! Love, Kim

John Hamilton
Date: 11/27/2015 10:34:00 PM

Thanks so much Kim this is totally unexpected. Thanks for sponsoring it. God bless. John

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/23/2015 8:51:00 AM

I am not familiar with the form but you have me wanting to check it out.

John Hamilton
Date: 11/23/2015 11:08:00 AM

Thanks for your kind visit, I am humbled. Silent one explains the form in one of his recent postings, so when you know the rules away you go. Looking forward to learning from you. JDH

Lin Lane

Date: 11/22/2015 7:40:00 PM

Glad you're having fun with these, John. I think you've got the hang of it, and what a worthy subject.

John Hamilton
Date: 11/26/2015 11:25:00 PM

Thanks Lin missed this somehow before thanks for visit.