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God of the Western Wind

Zephyrus, mighty God of wind, slips over western slopes to nudge the winter, in quick adieu, ..unfurled against the blue. He is husband of Khloris, a goddess of the green He is father of the fruited vine, and all the fruited trees which bend and bow to every breeze, that curl around his head. The stalky lupines long for him to take away the chill, while blue wild flax, will wave and swoon, upon the purple hills. A colored carpet wide and deep, is sweeping to the eye with clover green, so fragrant, lush, and it reaches to the sky to feel the depth of warming breath, exhaled with just his sigh His warming breath embraces youth, and jealousy is kin Appollon's love for Hyakinthos, may bring a tragic end We must ignore his boorish pride, for he thaws the frozen land and takes command when springtime comes, when green is in demand _________________________________________________ For the Contest sponsored by Shadow Hamilton Zephyrus.....God of the West Wind 1/1/15 http://www.theoi.com/Titan/AnemosZephyros.html (Greek Gods)

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Date: 1/7/2015 12:28:00 PM
Excellent, Carrie! Really very good indeed!! :) john.
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Date: 1/2/2015 11:44:00 PM
Carrie, Congrats on your win... Linda :
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Date: 1/2/2015 8:07:00 PM
I like your focus on one of my favorites of these wind gods. I bet you got a good placement with this one. so many pretty lines. Happy New year, carrie. congrats in the contest.
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Date: 1/2/2015 7:28:00 PM
congratulations Carrie on your winning poem ,well done
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Date: 1/2/2015 2:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Carrie. Wonderful free verse with rhythm and imagery. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/2/2015 1:06:00 PM
Another beauty Carrie, congrats and best wishes xx
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Date: 1/2/2015 12:58:00 PM
Congrats Carrie!
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Date: 1/2/2015 11:18:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/2/2015 7:40:00 AM
Congrats on the win and wish you all the best of 2015, carrie
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Date: 1/2/2015 4:27:00 AM
Another pointer to your excellence, congrats Carrie....huggs
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Date: 1/2/2015 2:40:00 AM
congrats on 2nd Carrie lovely visions well researched ty for your support hugs
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Date: 1/1/2015 5:08:00 PM
such wonderful imagery Carrie - good luck with the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/1/2015 4:30:00 PM
nicely done Carrie as always, good luck in the contest
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