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God Has Filled the Space

The street is empty dull and gray Winters flayed off, stormy winds blow Little boy before empty tray Lips are dry and eyes are burnt dough Clouds gather fury in the claw Elements are all with lances Their hands are over the fences Through the dust mist a smiling face Ivory hands on child's senses Church bell rings God has filled the space Dizain Me - Poetry Contest Sponsor Dr.Ram Mehta

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Skat A

Date: 2/15/2015 10:42:00 AM

Rajat ~ Congratulations on the win. It's an honor to read every poem In Dr Ram's DAZAIN ME contest. *Skat LOVE*

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2015 10:44:00 PM

a poignant one. congrats for your fine win.

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 2/5/2015 4:17:00 PM

Great write,Rajat...Congrats on well deserved win...

Grace Mutindi

Date: 2/5/2015 5:45:00 AM

Congrats on your win Rajat!

Joseph May

Date: 2/3/2015 7:43:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Rajat

Earl Schumacker

Date: 2/3/2015 11:24:00 AM

Hi Rajat. This is clearly a 7 and so I rated it 7 accordingly. It is the best Diazin out there. This is a very imaginative and well composed poem with stunning images. Earl

Eve Roper

Date: 2/3/2015 8:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem, Rajat , a 7 on this beautiful spiritual write. Blessings Sir Eve

Poesy Relish

Date: 2/3/2015 7:13:00 AM

A great write Rajat, #7... congrats on the win... nad!

Jan Allison

Date: 2/3/2015 6:35:00 AM

Wonderful intense imagery - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/3/2015 5:21:00 AM

Thanks for participating in my contest and congrats on the win, Rajatji

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/29/2015 12:08:00 PM

So nice to read your verse today. The imagery was fantastic. Light & Love

Funom Makama

Date: 1/28/2015 8:23:00 AM

Great lines with blesed words. Thanks for the magnificient share. I hope the new year is going well so far..

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/22/2015 2:29:00 PM

This one tugs at my heart strings. A wonderful way to Dizain me ! Well done, Rajat !

Gary Bateman

Date: 1/20/2015 2:30:00 PM

Rajat My Dear Friend, Another great write here. The imagery you've employed in this Dizain is quite wonderful and the words are captivating. You always have such a mastery with these types of writes. Very Well-Done and a "Seven" too. Best Always -- Your Friend!! Gary

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/20/2015 1:15:00 PM

Sad that in our modern world that there is still hunger even in America..I enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/20/2015 12:38:00 PM

Oh if only every space were filled...what a world it would be. A very profound write.