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God Forgot

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God Forgot

I think that God surely forgot
To give you a thing called a heart
I think it must have slipped his mind
To create you after our kind
I think that He made you the best
Much finer than all of the rest
He gave you an awesome physique
With nothing in it that is weak
Your smile dazzles with heaven’s light
Your lips He made just to delight 
He touched with sweet beauty your face
Each feature is so full of grace
It’s true….you are awesome to see
You have made a slave out of me
But one day you will fall apart
God forgot to give you a heart.

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  1. Date: 10/26/2012 12:01:00 PM
    All the attributes to a beautiful person, but if it isn't where it belongs(heart), it's worthless...Crafty write! I love it!

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 10/27/2012 10:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Marlon! Love the adjective "crafty"! :) You are very kind! :) God bless.
  1. Date: 10/25/2012 4:38:00 PM
    This made me smile : ) enjoyed your wonderful poem, love elizabeth

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 10/27/2012 10:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Elizabeth...thanks for taking the time to read and to post a comment. I'm touched! Glad I could make you smile! Have a wonderful day!