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God Complex

We are barely a whisper in the voice of the Earth Barely a flicker in the candle of the Sun Not even significant in the life of the stars And yet, we feel as though we are so important So proud of our meager accomplishments On this tiny, tiny rock Floating utterly alone in the universe

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/19/2015 6:47:00 PM
Amanda:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 2/17/2015 9:35:00 PM
great poem powerful construct and deep
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Date: 2/17/2015 10:19:00 AM
Hey Amanda, Welcome to Poetry Soup and thanks for sharing this deeply expressed and very powerful poem with us. Well done. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 1/13/2015 5:38:00 AM
- The new year is still "just a baby" .... I welcome you to P - Soup and wish you a beautiful and peaceful new year - Hope we can share many new poems this year - You write very well, Amanda - Have a great day - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/10/2015 9:47:00 PM
Amanda,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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