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God and Woman

God And Woman I did not want anything from The Almighty Sacrificed untouchable realization Which is symbol of myself And dedicated emotions, silence. I did not demand anything from the woman Allowed her into the corner of my mind Which is the center of bleeding And presented my intuition. The Almighty and the woman repeatedly call Destruction in my lonely life It's the ability to do more by them... SANDIP GOSWAMI, INDIA

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Date: 1/26/2015 6:21:00 PM
I have enjoyed wading through the stream of your conscienceness.
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Date: 3/13/2014 2:36:00 PM
Congrats on your win big brother : )
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Date: 3/7/2014 5:25:00 PM
A very interesting poem. Good work! Congratulations on your win, as well!
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Date: 3/6/2014 8:37:00 PM
congrats on your win, sandpip!
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Date: 3/5/2014 1:12:00 PM
A unique write! Congrats on the win!!!
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Date: 3/5/2014 7:30:00 AM
- Hello Sandip, congratulations on your well written winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/5/2014 7:01:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win.
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Date: 3/5/2014 6:38:00 AM
Congrats on the worthy win Sandip.
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Date: 3/5/2014 5:16:00 AM
Lovely poem. Congratulations on the fine win, sandip
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Date: 3/5/2014 5:05:00 AM
Nice, Sandip and welcome to Poetry Soup... Verlena
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Date: 2/23/2014 7:13:00 AM
interesting, Sandip, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/23/2014 6:26:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Sandip- I choose your first written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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