God

I'm human , created by GOD.. I'm not flawless nor perfect... Just a little , tiny human.... Not a devil made of fire nor an angel made of light... Just a human , made by the hands of God... I walk , I talk , I live , I die... I'm mortal... I have sorrows, I have sickness , I have problems , I have scars... I get break , I do mistakes , I fall , I crumble , I stumble , I crawl.... But I have my prayers to God , I know he's always there .... I know that he'll response... So please GOD , if you hear God , let my pain die in a far wide blank space... Let my heart follow your light , illuminate me with your faith... Guide me to the path of love and happiness... Please God , don't let go of my heart , just let it take a rest between your hands... Purify me from my sins...

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Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

Date: 1/15/2016 7:37:00 PM

Awesome poem Dalia

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/16/2016 5:17:00 AM

Thank you very much sweetie , I appreciate it....hugs / / :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/13/2016 9:51:00 PM

Dalia, this is a lovely, heartfelt prayer! So humble and honest. Love, Kim

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/14/2016 10:35:00 AM

Thank you very much, I appreciate it....

White Sage
Date: 1/14/2016 7:14:00 AM

thanks Kim...being enveloped in God's mercy is the greatest of all

Michael Whatley

Date: 1/11/2016 9:09:00 AM

I especially admire the first part. This was another really insightful piece, Dalia. An engaging, somewhat witty take on the existential plight. You did good Dalia, for a tiny human! :)

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/11/2016 2:15:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear for ur supportive and sweet sweet words , I appreciate your delightful visit and your pleasant comment, much appreciated, hugs / / :)

Lu Loo

Date: 1/10/2016 9:13:00 AM

Oh Dalia, this is wonderful! I will be catching up on your poems today :) *smiles*

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/10/2016 10:08:00 AM

Thank you sweet heart , I'm honored , I appreciate it, hugs / / :)

Legendary Legend

Date: 1/10/2016 8:57:00 AM

God will always answer us... for He loves us....great poem

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/10/2016 8:59:00 AM

Thank you very much my dear for ur lovely comment and ur delightful visit, it's much appreciated, hugs / / :)

White Sage

Date: 1/10/2016 6:24:00 AM

from my prayers dear friend, i pray those pains disappear with the breeze, excellent write Dalia, beautiful prayers

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/10/2016 6:34:00 AM

Thank you very much my dear for ur lovely words and your sweet comment , I appreciate it, hugs / / :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 1/10/2016 2:54:00 AM

I have a tender, most beautiful vision of you, nestled warmly in silken light within the large protective hands of the Almighty my Violet Poetess, its so beautiful, like you. "Let my pain die in a far wide blank space..." it shall be done, your pain will leave and your heart will know comfort...Justin

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/10/2016 3:10:00 AM

Oh dear how sweet you are , I thank you for the bottom of my heart for ur delightful visit and for ur sweet supportive words , they are much appreciated, hugs / / :)

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 1/9/2016 7:55:00 PM

I think we all want this, Dalia. So good of you to put it into words, so the rest of us can recognize our true reality.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/9/2016 8:10:00 PM

Thank you very much my dear for ur supportive words and your pleasant comment, I'm delighted by ur sweet visit , hugs / / :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/9/2016 7:19:00 PM

you have explained life, god and how we should all be, inside of this beautiful poem!

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/9/2016 7:22:00 PM

Thank you very much my dear for ur supportive and sweet words , I'm delighted by ur lovely visit and ur nice comment , much appreciated, hugs / / :)