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< cobblestone streets where she strolls waiting looking for her next clients lip stick skirt blouse boots she fluffs hair horn's blair people's stare all fair game waiting looking for her next clients dim lit streets she turns her head for another horn's blair people's stare all fair game liars cheaters she don't care waiting looking for her next clients lip stick skirt blouse boots she fluffs hair dim lit streets she turns her head for another cobblestone streets where she strolls

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Date: 8/22/2010 6:15:00 AM
excellent Katherine!!!
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Date: 8/12/2010 7:49:00 PM
I really like this, Katherine. Congratulations! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/9/2010 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations Katherine on your 1st Place win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Pantoum Me". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/8/2010 6:12:00 PM
Congrtas Stella, for first place in my contest
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Date: 8/8/2010 5:49:00 PM
shiver...a right awful nightmare so real...hard...almost bleeding good job geting the reader into the characters mind! Congrad's on your #1! Light & Love
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Date: 8/8/2010 12:53:00 PM
Very well written..liked the title too. Congrats on your 1st place..BG
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Date: 8/8/2010 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations Katherine, on this provocative winning poem!! Well done!!
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Date: 8/8/2010 7:18:00 AM
Major congrats Katherine on your first place win in Dr. Ram's contest Pantoum Me .. with this amazing and entertaining write.. enjoy your big win this happy Sunday my friend..with luv..
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Date: 8/7/2010 7:55:00 PM
so sad...a wasted life....
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Date: 8/5/2010 9:02:00 PM
Luv this Katherine.. good luck in the contest by Dr. Ram... very creative and original on an age old theme of those lady of the evening.. good luck my friend... with luv..
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Date: 8/1/2010 5:56:00 PM
Thanks, for supporting my contest, Katherine
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Date: 8/1/2010 8:27:00 AM
Interesting write Katherine, felt like I was standing on a corner watching the scene play out.. enjoyed this, if for the contest, best wishes ~ Wilma
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