Goal

Single water drop At the end of pear tree twig Survival the goal

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John Freeman

Date: 11/5/2009 6:52:00 PM

Survival `t is the Goal in this beautiful Haiku. Sincerely, Love, Moses

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/4/2009 1:47:00 PM

descriptive, poem

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/4/2009 4:24:00 AM

Fantastic Haiku Sara. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

Marty Owens

Date: 11/3/2009 4:58:00 PM

I love this Sara...Marty

James Fraser

Date: 11/3/2009 1:18:00 PM

Ooooo, i thought this was going be about soccer, caught me out Sara, koolio >> James

Ismael Nieves

Date: 11/3/2009 9:21:00 AM

Lovely goal, and fantastic script. My appreciations for your comment.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 11/3/2009 5:52:00 AM

Hi Sara, thank you for commenting my poem Flowering. A pity that I did not receive more comments on this one. You shoud know that the swan is the animal in my family's coat of arms. There are so many examples for companionship and care. Are you on facebook? I got some of my drawings and photographs there (Gert W. Knop). Have a nice week. Gert

Gert W. Knop

Date: 11/3/2009 5:43:00 AM

I like your "single water drop"! Nice Haiku. Let your pen flow...Regards, Gert . And thank you for your comments which i do appreciate...Gert. By the way, are you also on facebook? If yes you could have a look at my drawings and photographs!