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Go on Silence, emotional enemy Cold shoulder envy You’re gone again You’re gone again Broke in two Shadow on a pale face Knows the truth Heart keeps beating You have stopped breathing Go on Go on Cold hand wrapped in mine Warming up warm breath fog hides your eyes A mask in winter You become disquised Go on Go on Turn around Walk away I see your breath follow you Stuck on the ground Have to stay Your silhouette’s showing Hunched down Your energy glows No sound You’re gone again You’re gone again I fell down No more to give I fell down No life to live Won’t go on Go on Go on Walk into the shadow Faint sound of song Into the darkness You're gone Gone again Gone again Faint smell of your sweat Stains left on the floor You're memory anchored Onto my shore My wave’s crash You drift away Water filling my mouth Stopping words to say And the sentences are Gone again Gone again

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Date: 7/7/2014 8:00:00 PM
Tamilyn,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/27/2014 5:58:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Tamilyn. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 6/25/2014 2:13:00 PM
NICE POEM................W~elcome to poetrysoup. E~mblem of the best poetry website which gives you; l~ove that comes from richness of her words, c~ourage to harden your faith against writer's block, o~rientation toward being the best bard, m~emories about famous poems and poets. E~mbrace this lovely website TAMILYN . T~his is a caring community o~f all pleasant poems and prettiest poets. P~oet is a bard known for his o~rderly composition of words to e~ncourage love and peace, t~ransparent truth and reality, r~hymes of time and beauty of nature, y~ellowjournalism and comedy. S~oup is what we dissolve our food with. O~ne who dissolve his life in poetry soup will be u~pgraded.Please TAMILYN cook for the world; "p~oetrysoup"
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Date: 6/25/2014 11:44:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Tamilyn :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/25/2014 5:38:00 AM
Deep flow, sad thoughts TamilynA nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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