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Suzette Prime

Syllable count: 2, 3, 5, 7, 11, etc. PLUS a philosophical statement. Any combination of a prime number syllable count may be used per line, to avoid mirror images as this will detract from the free style feel. The line breaks serve as punctuation and no caps used, unless it is called for.

wars drugs poverty famine fear rape death and degradation that's the impoverished world desperate immigrants flee and yet we won't let them in go die on the other side of our new wall stay away from what’s ours we should be ashamed to call ourselves Christians there's no kindness in our hearts or tolerance for others even though God's commandment says to love our neighbors as we love ourselves (Suzette Prime) 8/11/2018

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/5/2021 4:50:00 AM

I say "Amen" to your assertion. Thanks for this example. God bless you.

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/9/2021 5:14:00 PM

Thanks Beata, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/16/2018 6:02:00 PM

A far cry from Love Thy Neighbour, for sure, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/16/2018 7:40:00 PM

Thanks Line, I welcome your input my friend, Emile.

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 8/12/2018 12:24:00 AM

Weighty concerns very well expressed. The divisions may outlive their most boorish facillitator, but maybe there are enough good people to overcome the hate in the end.

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/12/2018 8:47:00 AM

Thanks Lawrence, we can only hope that in the end love will win the battle for our hearts my friend, Emile.

Carole Duet

Date: 8/11/2018 11:18:00 PM

Absolutely horrible situation here and your poem describes it perfectly (as usual of course!). FAVED *soupmail

Sand Blown

Date: 8/11/2018 10:21:00 AM

the "...killers in high places who say their prayers out loud..." (leonard cohen)

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/11/2018 11:02:00 AM

Thanks Sand, we are in agreement my friend, Emile.