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Glug, Glug, Glug

Glug, Glug, Glug Drink it on down Glug, Glug, Glug My devil is brown Sip, Sip, Sip Between the lips Damn this stuff And its poisoness grip It drains the life It drains the cash And still demands To keep some stash Put it in a closet Put it in a shoe The only one fooled Is the person named YOU! Rockman

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Karen Anglesey

Date: 10/22/2013 5:38:00 PM

'Damn this stuff and it's poisonous grip'. Very profound. I should remember this as I take the occasional glug.

Debbie Knapp

Date: 6/16/2013 6:00:00 AM

Addiction is a disease. One so hard to understand for many. Dis - Ease. One who is at dis-ease with them self, and that has been maybe me, for a different reason but still... Great write and hope one if me, you or another is better.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 3/13/2013 4:17:00 PM

Great write I totally understand I have been there myself you are not alone.