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weeps the sliced moon... her cold gloom, like pale tomb of ash Trinity Contest of DebbieGuzzi by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 1/16/2013 4:28:00 PM
    Im going to "try" to write something for Cyndi's contest using this form and poem. Let's see what happens... Meanwhile, let me tell you something very important: we're missing you! : ) Come back soon! I hope everything is fine. Ruben.

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:04:00 PM

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:41:00 PM
    Love the OO sounds going on in this one! Congrats on the win, Nette.

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 10:08:00 PM
    Beautiful Than-Bauk!! Congratulations on your win, Nette! Ruben.

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 3:22:00 PM
    The ever facinating moon! Than-Bauk is an unusual form and I appreciated the re-visit to it, good on you nette! Congrad's on Your Win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 3:10:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning poems in the "Trinity" contest - well done Nette - Huggs / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:42:00 AM
    Well done Nette...congrats. BG

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 8:46:00 AM
    Congratulations on your fine win xx

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 8:29:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 7:07:00 AM
    Excellent poem enjoyed carries a beautiful picture. Good luck. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 9:46:00 AM
    wow, this is chilly, yet written with a warm heart...

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 8:05:00 AM
    Moon has never been sadder than this, nette, !! Jag

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 7:58:00 AM
    Excellent Than Bauk here Nette! Very well done.

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 6:56:00 AM
    You nailed it perfectly!Must be for Debbie's contest.I am also thinking of a Thank Bauk.

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 10:24:00 PM
    This is an outstanding write my friend, nette! I can vividly see the picture and feel the deep emotions here. By the way, is this for the contest? Thank you for sharing and I wish you all the best and luck! Have a blessed day always in sunshine! love/hugs:)LG/ Norie

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 5:10:00 PM
    You must have been looking out side last night. This is a perfect description.

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 1:50:00 PM
    Very well written Nette. - Have a lovely weekend - - / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 1:26:00 PM
    What a sombre poem you have written my friend! I really enjoyed reading this wondrous and incredible piece this afternoon! What a fantastic resemblance of gloom the moon is! And it does seem like the moon is weeping, always depressing when it's ashen! You are quite the masterful poet Nette! I love your work, Awesome Job!!

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 1:17:00 PM
    Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today I have enjoyed reading it. Have a great weekend Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 12:50:00 PM
    This is extremely good,dear nette.A true pleasure to read such excellent work! Agree with everything in Rora`s comment;) Have a peaceful and blessed weekend sweetie..Hugs~Arild