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Glimpses of Gold

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Mist rises in the way dampened spirits are lifted at dawn and each thing that is warmed by the first glimpse of sunrise can lighten the night's darkest hour just as sweet wildness of a hillside turns gold in the wake after clouds have passed ______________________________________________ \

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Sandra Haight

Date: 9/15/2016 5:48:00 PM

Such wonderful imagery in your verbal painting, Carrie. Congratulations on your fine podium win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 9/15/2016 3:39:00 PM

Yes, a touch of gold each morning!Congrats Carrie!

Tom Arnone

Date: 9/15/2016 2:42:00 PM

Beautiful images, Carrie. You've captured the power of the Sun's light and warmth over the living, breathing Earth. :-)

Joseph May

Date: 9/15/2016 9:29:00 AM

A lovely write Carrie..Congrats on your win..

Francis J Grasso

Date: 9/15/2016 9:08:00 AM

Love it! Congratulations, Carrie! ...Fran

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/15/2016 7:47:00 AM

Congrats, Carrie. Such a lovely description. I love the phrase "sweet wildness of a hillside" - I can see the landscape before my eyes. Agnes

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/27/2016 4:47:00 AM

Oh my Carrie, I can't believe this beauty didn't make the list. You have described the way mist meanders ghost like over the hills with such artful exquisite percission. It looks exactly that way here in Hawaii and everytime I see it I am still in awe after 37 years, it takes my breath away. A winner for me! 7 ; )

Anthony Mark

Date: 7/27/2016 3:33:00 AM

Carrie, you know I don't pull punches, ...this is a treat, the absolute use of Enjambment, is a poetic lesson for us all, ..you meld technical skill with beautiful content effortlessly...I bow as I must, and wonder if I'll ever be that good...well done..Ian x

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/25/2016 7:03:00 PM

A beautiful posting and surely a winner. Thank you dear Carrie for your comments on my Etheree. I have my daughters and my wonderful grandchildren and love them all with all my heart but even my daughters cannot share my early memories.

Lu Loo

Date: 7/25/2016 10:47:00 AM

Oh Carrie, this is perfect! Sure to be a winner lady, good luck! :)-luloo