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Glass Slippers

Inspired by Victor Buhagiar’s romantic writes. GLASS SLIPPERS He sees their shine - on his knees, he’d kiss her glass slippers. The ballroom floor - first date jitters, diamond waxed. The newness of their faces, skintight with anticipation - illumination of the mirrors. The crystal chandelier, like a tall tale; simply a fairy tale. Arising like the North star, he dares to sit - she’s vulnerable like her glass shoe, still breakable, but before she can entertain her timorous thoughts, his lips warm hers, like apple cider - hot cinnamon elixir. The gears in play, puzzle pieces find their match, a stone’s throw from the hearth. Her glass slippers so shiny, shapely heels - he thinks, ‘what if she lost just one?’ ‘Would I find her and remove the other one, too?’ Such thoughts make him blush. Her red lips amuse his thoughts. Illusions of cologne, polished hair, a hand held out for a waltz - her pulse in the dream. He’s swept up as her gown whirls around and around, hypnotic and his knees nearly buckle as her spray of sweet-scented hair spreads to his heart. The cyclonic pull of the storm renders them both breathless. The eye is hard to find - they waltz in the air. 12/7/2021

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Date: 12/9/2021 10:58:00 AM
This is beautiful, Kim. I adore your romantic pen and admire your poetic skill. I, too was swept up and away in "the cyclonic pull of the storm" and left "breathless". Your last line a grand finale, indeed! The pixie-dust of Victor's inspiration worked its magic wonderfully, I see :) Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/8/2021 2:40:00 PM
This shines like a diamond and twinkles better than the nearest star. I think that it should replace 'Cinderella' in the Disney pantheon. 6 Stars! Glistening! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/8/2021 2:57:00 PM
Thanks so much! ~ hugs
Date: 12/7/2021 3:47:00 PM
Hello, I came across your poem when I was surfing around. The title intrigued me. Aw love, is there anything better? Cinderella, my favorite movie as a child. I think all young girls would love a pair of glass slippers. I knew I did. My favorite line in your poem is, "The gears in play, puzzle pieces find their match... I'm glad I found your poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2021 4:10:00 PM
Thank you, Marikate! <3
Date: 12/7/2021 10:22:00 AM
This exquisite creation left me breathless, Kim. Such imagery! It's a fave for me. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2021 11:17:00 AM
Thank you, sweet Evelyn! <3 Kim
Date: 12/7/2021 8:48:00 AM
My poems are not all romantic. But thank you for your comment and assure you you fairy tale is much more romantic than mine. Very well done. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2021 11:16:00 AM
Thank you, Victor! ~ hugs
Date: 12/7/2021 8:44:00 AM
Wow! Just wow! Fave!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2021 11:17:00 AM
Thank you, P.S.! <3
Date: 12/7/2021 7:07:00 AM
If that kind of romance gets caught up in a storm... let the winds blow! Interesting approach, the way the last line of one stanza begins the next, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/7/2021 7:48:00 AM
Thank you so much, Lin :)

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