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Giving Up Cigarettes

I was a teen when first I met My demon lover--cigarette. I was a teen who was a fool; But he was popular and cool. For he was loved by movie stars And soldiers sipping beer in bars-- No surgeon general warned of death For those of us who breathed his breath. At his first kiss I coughed and choked. But I was obstinate. I smoked. This was no friendship formed in haste. I had to cultivate his taste. He followed me for fifty years, With food, with drinks, with joy and tears-- Through good relationships and bad He was the closest friend I had. Now as I try to break his spell, He tortures me with living hell-- But time can heal so I won't miss His intimaste and toxic kiss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/19/2018 8:44:00 PM
perfect
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Jerrell Jones
Date: 10/20/2018 7:14:00 AM
Thanks, Lifes Tapestry.
Date: 10/29/2016 8:37:00 AM
This is great Jerrell - and really representative of the smoking addiction I am forever trying to quit.
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Jerrell Jones
Date: 10/20/2018 7:15:00 AM
Thanks, Margo. I've gone two years now without tobacco or alcohol.
Date: 10/29/2016 8:33:00 AM
They do put you under a spell...Very good write
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Date: 10/29/2016 8:32:00 AM
This is a good one Jerrell! :)
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