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Giving My All--Sky Dreamer

I feel like rising hell I feel like going back To where I fell And yet I don’t Want a monster On this bed Meant for lovers Or on these Lips Or on these Hips Or on this Body Meant for somebody I wish. No I Regret this Regret us, what we were I don’t want to meet this fear And yet, I do last For a year passed fast And relieve what we had got That you forgot. God! Just take your ‘I love you like hell’ And burn Take back ‘You’re the only one’ And tell it to the others Stop Flashbacks that brought ‘And if you die- I wanna die with you’ And bury them up yours O yes! Now: She’s your best friend --I thought I was? She’s your love for “forever” --But you told Me that! She’s surprisingly yummy --It hurts... It hurts so badly! And yet: Heres my smile, Sky dreamer Corrected By Corinne x

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/5/2009 10:19:00 PM
this is very good. im in love with ur work.
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Date: 6/14/2009 5:03:00 PM
Sajdah, Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Matt Caliri’s “Funnest-Hardest Poem Ever. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 6/12/2009 8:56:00 AM
Beautiful write here, Sajdah !! Congratulations on your Honorable Mention in Matt's contest !!
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Date: 6/11/2009 4:48:00 AM
Super write Sajdah, many congratulations on your win>James
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Date: 6/10/2009 5:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win in Matt's contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 6/8/2009 9:59:00 AM
I Like This. This Is So Pretty. And I Feel This Pain. Have Before Too. I Think Its Even Harder. When They Say They Want You Back. Peace. Forever Boo Boo
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Date: 6/2/2009 9:11:00 AM
I like this one Saidah - If I can make a couple of suggestions: "I feel like raising hell" is the correct expression "On these lips" "On these hips" since you have two of each! :-)
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