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Given Up

I am giving up I am giving up slowly This may be the death of me Just have to get out of here I need to escape I been housing all these scars and insecurities The walls are closing in on me All the pictures and the windows and walls are closing in on me I don’t know what to do All alone don’t know how long I can hold on Just sitting on the ledge waiting for the next move to make one little step and life can be lost stand up take a step and now im gone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/6/2012 8:05:00 PM
Such deep torment Diann...you expressed them very well here! nice smooth flow...I'm so glad you have joined the soup! :) big hugs, love deb
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Date: 5/1/2012 8:12:00 AM
welcome to the soup..............Wonderful work and congrats on feature....Patrick
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Date: 4/18/2012 1:38:00 PM
Welcome to P-Soup diann. - Like your writhing....well done. Love from Anne-Lise
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