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Given From You

Time passes as days dissolve from view.. Messages from memories scroll down from pages of you.. All of which has molded a mind and soul that sings.. An everlasting learning experience that gave this heart wings.. Time does pass but I still stay humble and true.. Because time can't take away all that was given from you..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/14/2011 7:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry placing in Russell's "Challenge" contest Michael. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/13/2011 11:04:00 AM
Congrats on the big win, Michael. This is a massive! :)
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Date: 10/12/2011 4:36:00 AM
Amazing write Michael.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/12/2011 12:57:00 AM
I think you write the most beautiful love poems I have ever read. It just sounds so lovely, it gives me goosebumps. All women want someone to write about us that way. thank you for sharing. Lee
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Date: 10/11/2011 11:33:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Mike. Nice going. All the best. Ralph
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Date: 10/11/2011 9:18:00 PM
Congrats Michael luv on a fantastic win with these awesomely brilliant words of reminisce..u do so very well... those lingering romances haunt us for years to come.. I am guilty too.luv.. enjoy another awesome victory..your J.G. in exhausted mode.. need a beach day luv... up for it.. xoxoxoxo..
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Date: 10/10/2011 5:14:00 PM
A thoughtfull and flowing piece Michael, wishing you a top spot with this...
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Date: 10/10/2011 10:28:00 AM
Awww, Michael. look at your own writing, dear poet friend... U're not just gifted also talented and sweet. I'm so thrilled 'cos of your comment on my 'couples'. Thanks a lot, Michael. i'm honored to be your partner.. Always, Dinda.
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Date: 10/9/2011 11:01:00 AM
A beautiful poem here Michael.Enjoyed.Best wishes.
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