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give me wool, please I need wool, to knit hats, scarfs and socks for the homeless; that dwell in doorways gasping for breath in the bitter cold, as the biting snow swirls about like gauzy curtains drifting, blowing; on this cold bitter day, oh give me wool, please, I need lots of warm wool. _________________________ December 29, 2015 Verse Submitted to the contest, Wool sponsor, CT Did not place in contest.

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Date: 1/3/2016 3:44:00 PM
Your heart is not cold. It is a blessing for everyone here.
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Date: 1/4/2016 9:39:00 AM
Duke, thanks for visiting and commenting ~
Date: 12/31/2015 4:20:00 AM
You've knitted the words so well that am sure if you get the wool then you'd produce the best knit....best of luck in the contest
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Date: 1/4/2016 9:40:00 AM
I meant Sage, of course, sorry about that!
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Date: 12/31/2015 6:28:00 AM
Shehu, thanks for that nice comment, appreciate ~
Date: 12/31/2015 3:03:00 AM
Broken Wings, so soft and white is your heart... Happy New Year!!! Hugs!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 12/31/2015 6:29:00 AM
Olive, thanks for that lovely comment and for the hugs, and happy new year to you also ~
Date: 12/30/2015 12:12:00 PM
Broken, i like the way you pulled this contest off....... Happy New Years... Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/30/2015 6:24:00 PM
Linda, thanks for visiting and happy new year to you also ~
Date: 12/29/2015 9:03:00 PM
Very touching, love how you knitted the theme of this poem the way you did!
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Date: 12/30/2015 4:49:00 AM
Arthur, thanks for visiting my wool poem with that nice comment
Date: 12/29/2015 7:37:00 PM
What a heartbreaking and deep poem , it touched my soul....great write as always BW , it's a winning poem 4 me , good luck in the contest...hugs / / :) dalia
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Constance La France
Date: 12/29/2015 8:28:00 PM
Dahlia, so happy you like my poem, appreciate the forever support ~
Date: 12/29/2015 2:22:00 PM
Such a heartbreaking scene to see the homeless but it seems even more tragic especially at this time of the year ' the season of goodwill'. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 12/29/2015 8:30:00 PM
Jan, thanks for visiting, and for the encouragement, appreciate, yes it is so sad to see the homeless at anytime but in the winter it is even more cruel ~

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