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Give Me More of You

Give me more of you give me all like a flower my butterfly mind fluttering for you honey so unfurl all the petals. © kashinath karmakar (21st June 2011) =============00==============

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Johnny Sumler

Date: 6/30/2011 1:32:00 PM

Love the imagery in this exquisite Tanka. "give me all like a flower...my butterfly mind". I love your poetic creativity!

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/25/2011 1:05:00 PM

Love the romance Kash, enjoyed this Tanka of yours :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/23/2011 8:09:00 AM

most romantic invitation I ever read Kash.. lovely words.. good luck in the contest .. wonderful imagery and so vibrant too..luv it luv..

Kacey Greenlee

Date: 6/22/2011 8:23:00 AM

Great description.Very well written love.Thanks again for your comment on my win!!Have a wonderful poetic day....

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/22/2011 3:55:00 AM

So romantic, Kash. Love the image of the worhiped flower unfurling her petals for you! Great write, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/21/2011 10:49:00 PM

oooh, sensual in a subtle waym kahsi.. beautifully done! :) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/21/2011 10:29:00 PM

this is WONDERFUL, Kash. So little and cute just like a fluttering butterly!! More like this!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/21/2011 5:14:00 PM

Excellent metaphoric language in this one..Enjoyed the subtle message ..Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by ...Sara