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Give Me Love

I know it’s not smart to be in love with me. But please, oh please, don’t leave me be. Stay for just one second more. I want to be the one that you adore. The absence of your laugh from my life, makes me feel empty inside. Give me your love, if just for tonight. I promise to give you all my affection in return for your heartbeat and protection.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/8/2016 8:45:00 PM
Call out, emotional, yet young and insecure. Well, we r all feeling like this sometimes. U put ot on the paper. Like ur rhyme ))
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Date: 2/24/2016 5:17:00 AM
You may think you need them there to feel safe and comfort but it is just covering up the discomfort and creates more harm in the end.
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Date: 2/16/2016 6:55:00 PM
Very heartfelt and a longing to be loved. I like the hint of rhyme in your free verse. Tim
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