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What happened to my head Can't get anything mend Have to retrace my trend Don't want to become a shred

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Kp Nunez

Date: 2/27/2015 8:35:00 PM

Foggy? In which I case I should go on a break, maybe ruminate by the lake, or better still bake a cake, wha'd ya think of my take? Hugs and smiles : D Kim

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/28/2015 5:56:00 AM

I like the idea of ruminating by the lake:) and also taking a break! Foggy is an awesome title too. Thank you Kim

Suburban Lovechild

Date: 2/27/2015 6:43:00 PM

Head Games....Brain Drain...M.I.A. (Mind Inactive Again)

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/28/2015 5:53:00 AM

Am loving all these titles! Thank you Lovechild:)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 2/26/2015 11:01:00 AM

muse where are you.. :o?! title.sometimes we do have such but tgen again it will come..

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/26/2015 11:55:00 PM

Oh yes Olive. That's a good one too:) thank you

James Horn

Date: 2/26/2015 6:04:00 AM

I truly believe that our primary goal should be to motivate and stimulate each other. Jim Horn

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/26/2015 11:52:00 PM

I totally agree with you. Thank you again

James Horn

Date: 2/26/2015 6:01:00 AM

What has happened to my head My mind make things hard to mend Must trace my path from start to end Sad my poem now is only a shred. Just some thoughts. Jim

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/26/2015 11:51:00 PM

Yes. Thanks for passing by James:)