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Give Me a Smile

Your smile makes the moon smile your beauty makes the room brighter I like your nails I like your eyes I will be a fighter to save your smile! Your voice makes the birdsong sweet your touch melts the stone forever I like your nose I like your lips I will be a lover to get your smile! Your hardship makes my heart too hurts your tears make my eyes to yell and I feel unwell please, stop crying I love you, sweet just give me a smile!

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Date: 9/16/2020 11:18:00 AM
Good poem. Like Caren mentioned The essence of your love is what one captures.
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Date: 7/25/2020 12:52:00 AM
I was shocked when you listed "nails" before "eyes" but we notice what we notice. The essence is that you love everything about her. It comes across beautifuly.
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Imran Islam
Date: 7/25/2020 3:07:00 AM
Dear poet, thank you so much for your comments about it. Stay safe!

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