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Give it to Me

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Give it to Me

Give it to me!
Slice it all up with Roses;
Ripped open dreams,
Every single moment achieved;
Finally, Breathing for real..
Not pretending you are living;
Give it to me!
Swallowing the taste of Peace
Choke me with it;
Finally, rescued.

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  1. Date: 7/21/2012 11:30:00 PM
    ‡ A Beautiful Favourite Unique & Burning The Canvas, Ever Sooo Sweetly ‡

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 11:22:00 PM
    ‡ I Love Beautiful Passion; Drives Me Deep Into The Holder Of Its Burning Beauty, Sweet Beautiful Melani * What A Beautiful Name You Have & I Do Love This Fresh Verse; Super Koo's ... My Luv, Rachel ‡