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Give It Back, Or Give It Away.

Love tears apart the best of us. It's not a matter for the strong or the weak. It's a matter of trust. It's a matter of telling someone you are at the mercy of a feeling. Telling someone they have a piece of your heart, that they will probably take with them, no matter where they go, or who they meet. No matter how hard you try to give back or give it away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/1/2010 1:31:00 PM
Awesome perspective on love, Rachel. Well done! Welcome to Poetry Soup. I look forward to seeing more of your work. Best Wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 4/1/2010 5:20:00 AM
Great topic that you have chosen on which to write a poem...For some that giving away of themselves is very difficult...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 3/31/2010 8:59:00 PM
It conveys deep meaning
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Date: 3/31/2010 8:52:00 PM
Great job, Rachel. Very meaningful. Keep 'em comin'. xxx Ralph
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Date: 3/31/2010 7:09:00 PM
Stephanie. I think did explain what love was. I said it was a matter of trust, and a matter of telling someone you are at the mercy of a feeling. Just because it's short does not mean it's not well constructed. It's just different. Thanks for your opinion anyways.
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Date: 3/31/2010 6:14:00 PM
goodness! Rachel! this is amazing art! you have intensely articulated the core of human existence here! another fav! you are very talented! jimbo
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