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Below is the poem entitled GIVE AND GIVE which was written by poet Dawn mclaughlin. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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You give and give
 all we can
 push and shove
 which way first.
Like a mountain 
rocky so tall
 face it fall on

 brave no fear along.
obstacles we meet
 round them we walk
 maybe you fight hard
 climbing with pride.
Then at the top
 looking on down below
 thinking too ones self
 was it worth it at all.

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  1. Date: 10/27/2012 9:58:00 AM
    sparse and nice

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 7:29:00 AM
    A wonderful piece of poetry that I enjoyed reading today Dawn. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 3:33:00 PM
    So nice to be reading you today. Another tablet from your talented soul. Very enjoyed. Hugs Michael