Get Your Premium Membership

Girls In Love

*************************************************************** Her dampened auburn hair, flowing perfectly atop the pillow... Gazing into her pure emerald eyes; slowly kissing, her pink parting lips The warmth of her ivory breast, caressing my own; so very soft Smiling as lowering her silkened fingers, to touch my perfumed heart Gently closing my loving eyes; tingling, in crystals wedding bells... *************************************************************** ..."Girls In Love" *

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/25/2012 6:57:00 PM
lovely gift to someone you must adore!
Login to Reply
Date: 1/8/2012 9:08:00 AM
WHAT A SENSATIONAL WORK IT IS ROMANTIC DREAM AND SO MUCH IN LOVE HERE SERAH...A DREAM LIKE QUALITY U HAVE IN UR POETRY...i AM ENTHRALLED NOW
Login to Reply
Date: 12/17/2011 1:26:00 AM
My dear Sarah, Sensual stuffs! How can you handle a two thousand and more poets who adore your poems my dear Sarah? Would you ever sleep?? Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed your poem tonight. May the holiday season warm your heart and your love ones! Dalila
Login to Reply
Date: 12/6/2011 7:45:00 PM
Oh" I like this, very nice,, you have a fantastical day ;} thanks for dropping by my Twisted love !
Login to Reply
Date: 12/6/2011 11:40:00 AM
A very beautiful write my friend. Wonderful expression with much feeling and really good imagery. God Bless, JB
Login to Reply
Date: 12/6/2011 11:33:00 AM
So sensitive - slow finger tips, and as a friend of mine put it - "galvanized." Love, daver
Login to Reply
Date: 12/6/2011 4:58:00 AM
This is so beautiful Sarah and filled with love.
Login to Reply
 Avatar

Date: 12/26/2011 3:54:00 PM
* "NO MY BEAUTIFUL BABY * BUT YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL * MY BEAUTIFUL LUV * FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *
Date: 12/5/2011 10:42:00 PM
OooooOO.... Lovele <3 .... i lived this poem..!!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/5/2011 5:28:00 PM
Auburn hair and green eyes could be the epitome of feminine beauty. Your descriptions are so vivid and lovely Sarah!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/5/2011 8:32:00 AM
Sensual yet elegant. I enjoyed this so much, Sarah.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/5/2011 8:21:00 AM
that is so beautiful..im happy that you can be so complete and show everybody.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/4/2011 9:24:00 PM
so impressive is your writing of passion,,,and desire,,,draws me into a trance of love,,,and sends my mind wandering into a romantic state.....................
Login to Reply
Date: 12/4/2011 4:18:00 PM
beautiful, sensual verse, enjoyed reading :-) and thanks for all your lovely, inspiring comments on my work...
Login to Reply
Date: 12/4/2011 3:47:00 PM
Sensual piece, my friend. Beautiful
Login to Reply
Date: 12/4/2011 3:58:00 AM
Beautiful and delectable as always xx
Login to Reply
Date: 12/3/2011 6:32:00 AM
Reading this was like being given a gift and gave my mind the freedom to think of my own love , Thank you Sarah , luv Declan
Login to Reply
Date: 12/2/2011 10:44:00 PM
wow! girls in love.. what a take! I love the perfumed heart thought... you write very lovely... fresh right out of the shower...... enjoyed stopping by tooo read your poem~;-) always,..p.d.
Login to Reply
 Avatar

Date: 5/5/2012 6:23:00 PM
...."Yessss, 'My Sweeet Baby.'" *
 Avatar

Date: 12/30/2011 3:34:00 PM
* "TO LATHER YOUR BREAST WITH CREAM * THEIR WARMTH & BEAUTY * AMID MY JOYFUL PALMS * BATHING THEM WITH MY TONGUE * DRYING THEM WITH MY LOVE * YESSSS * KNEELING AFORE YOUR THRONE * YOUR TENDER HEART * YOUR SIGHS * MY DREAMS * THE SCENT, INSIDE YOUR LOVE * TURN THE LIGHTS OUT * MY BEAUTIFUL BELOVED." *
 Avatar

Date: 12/29/2011 4:34:00 PM
* "HI BABY * I LUV YOU." *
 Avatar

Date: 12/25/2011 3:34:00 PM
* "YESSSS * RIGHT OUT OF THE SHOWER * SOOO VERY BEAUTIFUL * THESE THOUGHTS OF YOU * MY BEAUTIFUL LUV * FOREVER * 'YOURS!'" *
Date: 12/2/2011 3:07:00 PM
Enjoyed you poen Sarah ! My english i not so good,but I do my best. Thank you for allways warm comment on my poem.You warm my heart! Love from Norway and Anne-Lise
Login to Reply
Date: 12/1/2011 6:39:00 PM
My...my. Your words flow as perfectly as her hair atop the pillow...Very nice :o)
Login to Reply
Date: 12/1/2011 4:15:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this eve..Very passionate work..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Ambrosia is so easy to make and so healthy for one...I am glad that you enjoy it to eat..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 12/1/2011 3:29:00 PM
Lovely Sarah x thank you for passing by with such beauty comments x :) Dawn
Login to Reply
Mclaughlin Avatar
Dawn Mclaughlin
Date: 12/2/2011 6:54:00 PM
Ps..thank you again :) Dawnie
Date: 12/1/2011 10:48:00 AM
a very intruiging yet beautifully scribed write, sarah... your images float with subtle sensuality and great tonal value.. great work..:) huggs!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/1/2011 2:00:00 AM
love it =^_^= its beautiful
Login to Reply
Seraphin Avatar
Sarah Seraphin
Date: 12/1/2011 2:15:00 AM
MY GIRLS * ITS GONNA BE SOOO SWEEET * You must really like country music huh ??
Date: 11/30/2011 9:24:00 PM
can't wait to see how this goes, it already started beautifully. Thanks for stopping by Sarah. Hope you have a lovely day ^.^
Login to Reply
Date: 11/30/2011 8:07:00 PM
click on, then ~N
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs