Girls

Garrulous girls gather Glorious and giddy Giggling and gossiping Geared up endearingly Go out in groovy nights Getting glacial but gay Girls giving grief to guys Syllables 42. Counted on www.howmanysyllables.com +++++++ April 27, 2014 Form:PLEIADES Dr. Ram Mehta

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/25/2014 10:28:00 AM

Clever use of alliteration - great write as usual!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2014 6:15:00 PM

loved that last line, giving grief to guys. that is sure the truth!!! NIce one.

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 4/27/2014 9:38:00 PM

Since when? :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/27/2014 6:30:00 AM

wonderful! I enjoyed this very much!

Len Gasun

Date: 4/27/2014 2:42:00 AM

I'm so honored to read and be the first one to comment on this brilliant entry of yours for one of the most wonderful and challenging contests my dear friend Dr. Ram. Loving it so much and the ending;))))-you made me smile. Good luck in the contest & thank u so much for sharing & your constant visit on my writes as well. Biggest hugs. Have a great wkend! love lots, Leonora