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Girlhood Stages--Edited

While sighs arose from dried marsh and clay, the girl in me embraced an amiable virtue born out of an affinity for our town’s revelries : Oh those bouncy play with cousins when burnt dusk kindly taught me the wisdom of moon’s varied phases, fables, then a soul tamed through older clans’ demise as this ancient realm became a night keeper, leading me unto stages of womanhood Today, I am older, perhaps more dauntless… yet nostalgia seeps into these heavy eyes where youth’s indulgences are now gone, damp, acrid... A bushfire searing our farmstead like cinder on my hands bolstered my spirit Though parish bells knell afar, long gazes of abode ‘s remnants tear my flesh, mirroring portraits of youth epiphanies which now mold my present life's outlook… a kind resolute amidst triumphs and hurdles. Brian Strand’s Completely Your Choice 17 ~ format and spelling of ' girlhood edited due to bad internet 9/27/2020
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Date: 2/15/2021 11:55:00 AM
I can't help but envy, Nette, the way you make the words dance so beautifully....
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Date: 10/3/2020 9:43:00 AM
So touchingly beautiful Nette.
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Date: 9/28/2020 1:28:00 AM
You always astound me with your poems. Seems there is a lot of psychology mixed with pleasant thoughts. ~~
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