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Girl With the Mystery Eyes

What lies behind those mysterious black eyes? What happened to our paths why did they become tied? Nobody spoke to you, why were you alone? After seeing you smile my heart has fondly grown. In the middle of nowhere you're from my home town? This cannot be real I realise with a frown. Maybe it's time to put these mushrooms down.

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Jan Allison

Date: 11/5/2014 8:17:00 AM

Oh I love the final line made me smile:-) great write:-) Hugs jan xx

Mr Jaybus
Date: 11/12/2014 7:31:00 AM

Only just worked out how to reply, Thank you for the lovely comment Jan, I travel around all around the UK a lot for work and met an intriguing girl on a night out near London and after spending all night with her found out she was from my home town. No story is fun without a twist though :)